Ardor

your music moves
clouds in the cool sky
spellbound embracing stars

thoughts knot and pool
with ardor emotion
listening to you play music
with the push and pull
of each black and white key
like the free back and forth
rhythmic gentle motion
of the ocean tide
as I too magically hypnotize
in a dream moving upon its waves

twining blush feelings rush
as l lean forward
and focus upon your face
you briefly elope
and secretly steal
a glance upon mine

through your unspoken
hush words touching my heart
letting your mere utterance
escort the melody
melt down my spine
then back up again
yearning for ardor
emotion of your touch
through the ebbing night


5/4/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Eve this is full of imagery that brings a smile on my face and a leap in my emotions. Loved reading it. Congratulations on your win :)
Hamilton Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 8:40 PM
Such a moving write Eve, congrats on a nice win!
Watt Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 4:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this yearning write interwoven with music and longing. Nothing reaches the soul like good music. Beautifully done, Eve. Congrats on your win! Hugs ~ John
Idudje Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 3:07 PM
Wonderful Penned This poem Is tantalizing Like to read It again Congratulations On your big Win
Goldsmith Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your win. You always have a wonderful write. Enjoy your day and win......
Krutsinger Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Those are the best times of all! "your unspoken hush words touching my heart" Great job, Eve.
Ball Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 12:20 AM
WoW! I can feel the undulating pull of your words as the music ebbs and wanes in the moonlight. Excellent. God Bless, JB
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