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Ardor

your music moves clouds in the cool sky spellbound embracing stars thoughts knot and pool with ardor emotion listening to you play music with the push and pull of each black and white key like the free back and forth rhythmic gentle motion of the ocean tide as I too magically hypnotize in a dream moving upon its waves twining blush feelings rush as l lean forward and focus upon your face you briefly elope and secretly steal a glance upon mine through your unspoken hush words touching my heart letting your mere utterance escort the melody melt down my spine then back up again yearning for ardor emotion of your touch through the ebbing night 5/4/2020

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Date: 5/26/2020 1:46:00 PM
Eve this is full of imagery that brings a smile on my face and a leap in my emotions. Loved reading it. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 5/25/2020 8:40:00 PM
Such a moving write Eve, congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 5/7/2020 4:00:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this yearning write interwoven with music and longing. Nothing reaches the soul like good music. Beautifully done, Eve. Congrats on your win! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 5/6/2020 3:07:00 PM
Wonderful Penned This poem Is tantalizing Like to read It again Congratulations On your big Win
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Date: 5/6/2020 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You always have a wonderful write. Enjoy your day and win......
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Date: 5/6/2020 6:28:00 AM
Those are the best times of all! "your unspoken hush words touching my heart" Great job, Eve.
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Date: 5/5/2020 12:20:00 AM
WoW! I can feel the undulating pull of your words as the music ebbs and wanes in the moonlight. Excellent. God Bless, JB
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