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Poem written for and submitted to “Quatern—Old or New” poetry contest, Joesph May, sponsor, November 5, 2025. 

ARBOREAL WHISPERS-Quatern Poetry Contest

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Willows weep in the morning sun. Roots write braille onto buried rocks. Each ring a witness to droughts, floods~ observer of seasonal tides. Willows weep in the morning sun. Sap pulses slow as glaciers melt~ veins map stories untranslated by wind, beetle, or human sighs. Willows weep in the morning sun. Underground, fungal threads ignite enzymatic cries for kinship~ networks flaring like neural stars. Willows weep in the morning sun. Sunrise cracks the bark; forest breathes oxygenated confession~ We have always known how to wait.
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Hind Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 10:43 PM
This is utter loveliness. "enzymatic cries for kinship~ networks flaring like neural stars. " awe-inspiring lines
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 5:06 PM
thanks, Paige! Your ongoing support builds my confidence as I'm trying new things. Appreciate your visits, hugs, Sara
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 5:04 PM
Lovely write, I wonder how they got their name a Weeping Willow. just checked;The weeping willow gets its name from the way that rain looks like tears when it drips off the curved branches.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:38 AM
oh, wow, thanks for sharing that information about weeping willows....enjoy your day, hugs, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 2:35 AM
Yes, they await the day when Jesus will come and make this earth what it should be. What a beauty the earth will be once it is healed of its curse. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:39 AM
thanks for your spiritual and inspirational comments, Sara K. Thanks for visiting, hugs, SAra B
Rose  Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 7:42 PM
a perfect form for a perfect poem , just right Sara, :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:39 AM
awww, thank you, sweet Rose
Jones Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 7:34 PM
A great contender! Wow you write in so many forms! I am unable to get this form! Best wishes!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:40 AM
thanks, Karen....this form was definitely a challenge. appreciate your visit and well wishes, hugs, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Lovely tribute, Sara ~ particularly love your closing line
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:40 AM
many thanks, Line
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 8:27 AM
I enjoyed what you have written here, my friend, Aloha, William.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:41 AM
thanks, William. appreciate you and your ongoing support,
DiMino Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 6:38 AM
Long known for spiritual healing, a great topic. Well done, Sara.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:41 AM
thank you, Joe!
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