Arachnophobia

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big bright green spider
on my drivers-side window-
you held me hostage




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5/21/2018

I parked my car and there's a stare down between me and spidey. I didn't know when I opened the door if it would drop inside the car (not good) or outside (preferable). I was only held hostage for 3 or so minutes until I made my move. Success! Both of us walked away from the car in different directions :)

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Date: 5/22/2018 9:42:00 AM
The scary part is when you see the spider while driving - that's happened to me, lucky I didn't have an accident - great haiku, Mark-
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/22/2018 5:07:00 PM
Yikes! So you have spider stories too, Michelle :) Thanks for taking the time. Your comment is much appreciated.
Date: 5/22/2018 7:08:00 AM
Love this! How true!
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/22/2018 7:39:00 AM
Sounds like you've been there, done that, Kim :)
Date: 5/22/2018 2:45:00 AM
ha ha ha the ////00\\\\ has his eyes on you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/22/2018 7:35:00 AM
Superb display of spidey-sense on your part, Jan!
Date: 5/21/2018 11:12:00 PM
LOL - keep your eyes on the road, Mark!
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/22/2018 7:33:00 AM
I know, right? So, I park my car and there's a stare down between me and spidey. I didn't know when I opened the door if it would drop inside the car (not good) or outside (preferable). I was only held hostage for 3 or so minutes until I made my move. Success! Both of us walked away from the car in different directions :) Thanks, Line.
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