Arabesque

ARABESQUE (triple Haiku) faded lace old times this favorite tune playing “smoke gets in your eyes’ she said “I love you” and at the moment meant it time jaded spilt wine simple arabesque but oh so complicated she said “I love you”

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/5/2010 8:07:00 PM

this is really beautiful Daver--loved the story in it :) & I'm looking forward to reading your Con-verse--it's really fun to write, thanks :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2010 10:46:00 PM

LIke Wine. . .So FINE!! (in that good old fashioned style of yours!) soupmail

Date: 4/30/2010 4:11:00 PM

I like your style! The pauses work well for emphasis. Nice use of imagery. Karen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2010 6:01:00 AM

always a pleasure, have 3 smiles on em, enjoyed,..p..d