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Aquatic Mania


Into the cool crisp water the swimmers plunge,
from high above the divers arch like liquid silver;
aquatic Olympics is my favorite sport of all others,
Oh, how I admire the swimmers and the high drivers.

The women with their perfect bodies so lovely,
gliding through the crystal blue with a sweet goal;
dedication and determination has brought them here,
and when they reach the wall they rise up as water cascades.

Oh, the men, strong and powerful with muscles,
flying in that emerald blue mighty with endurance;
they seem unstoppable until they emerge dripping wet,
like a wild waterfall the drops falls off their beautiful bodies.

Yes, it is the swimming and diving for this girl,
I, so admire their perseverance, patience, excitement;
years of training and a positive attitude has made them,
winners even if they do not get Gold, Silver, or even Bronze.

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August 9, 2016

Poetry/Verse/Aquatic Mania
Copyright Protected, ID 16-815-274-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the premiere contest, Olympic Mania
sponsor, Janis Thompson

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Garcia Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 4:02 PM
A splendid job capturing a magnificent event. Truly wonderful poem. I'm happy to have read if
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Wonderful lines and pictures. Congrats! Sunita :)
Kimathi Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Congrats BW, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Such wonderful imagery in your beautiful poem, of the vision of these magnificent Olympic swimmers shaped with dedication, determination, and endurance to excellence. Congratulations on your podium win, Broken Wings! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Johnson Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Yes I love the swimmers and the gymnasts best. Congratulations Constance on your lovely poem and win. Love, Joyce
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 9:39 PM
Lovely, Broken Wings! Congratulations!
Scars Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 9:08 PM
Broken Wings, lovely poem and just as Janis said below I want to go swimming now! (which I may do tomorrow!)-Congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Inman Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 8:06 AM
A lovely write BW. Not much into sports.
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