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Appropriation

The baren bones lay bare across the fields of alliteration Unnecessary abstraction leaves the bourgeois man bereft of care And yet, the obliviously self aware give cause to sight's deprivation The enigmatic preparation gives many metaphors to compare You rack your brain, paper tears, from too much stylization personal interpretation brings to light the common ground, the things we share But if your minds in disrepair, that's premeditation Less is lost in coloration, but I don't think we're going there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2016 2:26:00 AM
Corwin Brown, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:43:00 PM
Corwin, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
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Date: 5/21/2010 9:55:00 AM
I like the tone of this poem and the essence of imagination. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/12/2010 6:30:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Corwin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2010 3:00:00 AM
I enjoyed the read, excellent work. I like the phrase paper tears from to much stylization, nice metaphor toe relationships.
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