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Apprehensive Blue Jay

scared of predators sits on an oak awaken snarfing the peanuts 10-5-2020 ~DEEPA~ Second place in the contest. Note1:*Haiku-Blue Jay Poetry contest Sponsor:Tania Kitchin

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Date: 5/15/2020 11:24:00 AM
Back with congratulations V! xomo
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/16/2020 3:03:00 AM
Great.:-) My best wishes for you in whatever you do Ma'am !! Take care:-*
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Mo The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/15/2020 3:22:00 PM
Thank you V! Deep down I'm still Mo ;),
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/15/2020 1:18:00 PM
Oh wow..ma'am..you changed your name to 'Pigeon Tart' nice one:-) Anyways I'm thankful for your continuous review and support.:-) Congratulations on your best win in the contest too..Loved your creative Haiku.Take care.
Date: 5/15/2020 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations! Enjoyed. Regards —MDJ
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/15/2020 10:48:00 AM
Thankyou very much sir. Enjoyed your Haiku too.. Blue Jays robbing your sleep is interesting.:-) My heartily Congrats for your place in the contest.
Date: 5/14/2020 5:41:00 PM
love the word snarfing V! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/14/2020 10:46:00 PM
Thanks a lot..:-) Congratulations for your win too.. Beautifully written on greedy Jays. Good luck for all your upcoming works.Take care.:-)
Date: 5/14/2020 3:57:00 PM
V.Deepa, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun haiku, loved the last line!
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/14/2020 10:51:00 PM
Thanks a bunch for placing my piece and warm appreciation ma'am.:-) Glad that you liked my haiku. It's good that your encouraging soupers through your contest's. All the best for all your works too.Take care.:-)
Date: 5/14/2020 12:34:00 PM
Wonderful..predators and peanuts..Great win Deepa..Congrats..
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/14/2020 10:38:00 PM
Thankyou :-) Congratulations for your win too.. Beautifully described loneliness of Jay.Liked it.
Date: 5/14/2020 11:58:00 AM
The blend of fear and relief is amazing. Congratulations on your win :)
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/14/2020 10:42:00 PM
Hi.. thankyou very much..:-) Love to blend & bring contrast in my work sometimes.. Congratulations for your place in the contest as well. Liked your creative haiku too.
Date: 5/10/2020 8:29:00 AM
"snarfing", what a fantastic word! Why have I not heard that before?? Enjoyed this haiku enormously, I hope it's a winner, my best to you! xomo
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/10/2020 2:58:00 PM
Woh ! I am happy for having heard.. that you have learnt a new word through my work. Heartily thanking you Mam.I feel good receiving your support!!.:-)