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Apples

perhaps prosaically I see only apples                                                                  
  tumble-positioned in cane baskets
  light-patched, colour-streaked
  stalks angled from a cleft
  a stick stuck in a deep dimple
  sometimes one leaf dried
  a sign of the apple tree
  
  I see no eve
  no snake whispering in a shell-pink ear
  no adam being so-called tempted
  his blood-song inherited answering a call to arms
  too young to resist the naïve young-womanly charms
  his master asleep or more busy inventing new worlds
  new galaxies aeons of light years away
     
   but adam and eve are long gone
   centuries ago they went on some fool’s word
   that eating an apple meant leaving paradise 
   for a desert or a wilderness
   
   more or maybe less than a sinful sexual symbolism
   redder apples would more remind me of snow white
   and her small white even teeth
   piercing the polished red skin
   crunching into the white fruit-flesh
   delicious and juicy
   but a maggot of poison
   the jealousy of the queen

    so perhaps prosaically
    I carefully check my apples before I eat  
    cutting them into pieces
    halves halved and again halved
    or even childishly slicing them into rounds
    marvelling at the wheeled flower of the seeds
    and the seed cases
    admiring the thin curled red ribbon strip

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/21/2018 6:11:00 AM
nice and a unique poem ...giving a good account of adam and eve and love and attraction....i would like to eat the apply with you Thanks
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Susan Baquie
Date: 2/21/2018 3:15:00 PM
Thank you for having read my poem. I will read yours shortly.
Date: 11/4/2016 5:36:00 PM
thank you for your comment
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