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Apple Worm Golden Delicious, Red Delicious, Empire, Fuji, Gravenstein, apples They say an apple a day keeps the Doctor away But One worm can destroy a whole bushel of good apples By: Eve Roper 12/18/2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/22/2015 7:53:00 AM

your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/21/2015 9:48:00 AM

This made me smile Eve lets hope the worm will turn one day - do beware of the apples - the only thing worse than finding a worm in an apple... is finding half a worm when you bite into it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 12/21/2015 10:05:00 AM

Hahaha...... food for thought :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2015 11:10:00 AM

A clever thought shared (sometimes they just run away and I can't catch them) ... CayCay

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 2:56:00 PM

We need to put some slipper banana pills of some sort to make them slid off. Merry Christmas and a very Happy New year with tons of blessings

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/19/2015 2:24:00 PM

the purpose of the worm....is to ruin what we concern....as consumable for our joy....and that's every woman, man, girl and boy....;)

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 11:36:00 AM

Oh, Wow, so well put Sir. I like your version better. A poem to write Sir :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/19/2015 10:47:00 AM

Hi! my lovely friend, it's great philosophy. In a basket of hundred apples one perishing apple can perish all the apples one by one. Beautiful thought. My favorite poem and poetess too. Clean 7 i think. Loved always,bl

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 2:55:00 PM

Thank you, B.L. you have been so kind. Merry Christmas and a very Happy New year with tons of blessings

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/19/2015 4:46:00 AM

Profound! The problem is old and still the solution we have not found! Wonderfully written , dear Eve! Merry Christmas to you and to your family!

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 2:54:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios, my friend. I love to see your garden grow besides your wisdom. Merry Christmas and a very Happy New year with tons of blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2015 8:00:00 PM

yeah, Eve. Sure do wish we could get rid of the worm. It's got a lot of nerve!!!

Eve Roper
Date: 12/18/2015 8:51:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, we sure need too. Hugs dear friend Merry Christmas

Lu Loo

Date: 12/18/2015 4:40:00 PM

hehehe! Chuckles from Michigan! :) Very cute and clever Eve *smiles*

Eve Roper
Date: 12/20/2015 2:53:00 PM

Laura, we need a little laughter around her :) Merry Christmas and a very Happy New year with tons of blessings Hugs dear friend

Lin Lane

Date: 12/18/2015 12:18:00 PM

lol Kinda like one rotten apple, too. Great thoughts, Eve, and what a cute cartoon. Golden Delicious for my pies and Fuji for eating as is. They are so juicy.

Eve Roper
Date: 12/18/2015 12:36:00 PM

Need to get rid of that nasty worm! I don't want my apples to have a surprise in them when I take a bite! Not to comforting to the tummy besides the visual and taste is embedded in your brain forever. YUCK! :'( Hugs dear friend

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/18/2015 11:32:00 AM

Good one, sweetie! :) That's the truth....Those worms needs taking care of. Love and hugs