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Apple Sand

to time the rhyme or range of orange when to smile and when to cringe nothing fits but on the fringe yet I find red yellow wonder defining moments to unhinge My orange dingy dinghey the cold sea it's under icily swelling nicely A weighted wait To float a boat

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Date: 10/18/2008 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A nice adventure in an orange dingy!! :) ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/18/2008 10:28:00 AM
Donald - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup! Peace always, John
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Date: 10/15/2008 4:53:00 PM
Very interesting poem Donald - Congrats on being featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/14/2008 7:28:00 PM
I had to laugh when a vision of a Mae West life preserver came into this twisted mind of mine ... smile ... wonderful write here that brings great imagery, Donald. Love the title also. Congratulations on your writing being featured this week here at the Soup!!
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Date: 10/13/2008 9:43:00 AM
Orange you glad you wrote this one? Congratulations Donald on the featuring of "Apple Sand." Vince
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Date: 10/13/2008 5:02:00 AM
Congrats Donald on your great poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/12/2008 3:11:00 PM
Interesting title--interesting imagery. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing! Karen
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