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Apple Pickin' Time

Me and Sweetie pickin’ apples - Ones for making pies we find. While my Sweetie climbs the ladder, I stand watching from behind. In his levis he’s a cutie, plucking apples from the tree. Meanwhile, I admire his booty since he’s faced away from me! Apple pickin’ time is nice, but what we’ve gathered will suffice. Me and Sweetie think alike - We need to add a little spice! Me and Sweetie pickin’ apples - Ones for making pies we find. While my Sweetie climbs the ladder, I stand watching from behind. Underneath this autumn sun I’m so glad I have my guy. Apple pickin’ time is done. I’m ready for my sweetie pie!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/18/2017 4:43:00 PM
Congrats to you and your cutie for your win, Andrea.
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Date: 11/18/2017 3:59:00 AM
I used to love taking my kids apple picking ... wonderful memories this brings back! Congrats, my friend, this is charming! :-) <3
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Date: 3/1/2014 2:00:00 PM
Andrea Such a cute and creative write. A sweet guy and sweet pie. Perfect combination. LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Taming A Heart poem.
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Date: 12/4/2013 7:34:00 PM
Nothing nicer than watching booty and eating apple pie. Cute one. love phyl
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Date: 11/12/2013 5:42:00 PM
Congrats on your winning entry..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 11/11/2013 10:03:00 PM
Andrea this is so cute! I really like it! This is going in my favs. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/11/2013 7:19:00 PM
# 1 Again Congrats!! Myself..I seem to be the king of HM ,,,,,,Rick
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Date: 11/10/2013 7:52:00 AM
Love the poem, especially how the ending wraps things up so natural and so perfect!
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Date: 11/9/2013 8:37:00 PM
Here's a Congratulatory apple for the teacher lol, knew this would be at the top Petal. Take care, Richard
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Date: 11/9/2013 5:22:00 PM
Andrea, Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE
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Date: 11/9/2013 11:38:00 AM
Very clever with adorable visuals. Watching your sweetie pie's booty while he climbs the ladder to pick apples. Love the sweetness of this one. Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/9/2013 11:03:00 AM
Really cute! Some day you'll run across it and wonder why you kept changing the rhyme. I have been gone for a few days and am having to get back into it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/9/2013 8:37:00 AM
loved this one the first time I read it...congrats on your win :) hugs
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:51:00 AM
Very beautiful poem. Congratulations on your grand win friend Andrea ;) Cheers!!
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Date: 11/9/2013 3:46:00 AM
Congrats on the win , Andrea
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Date: 10/31/2013 4:08:00 PM
Heaven on an autumn day is what you've sweetly written. Bring along your lovely pet and she'd be a prrrfect kitten. Wow, did I just write that. :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:48:00 PM
This is so cute Andrea....slips off the tongue like icecream, sweet and creamy! Loved it! How do you do it? Every one of your entries is so special, I am lucky to crack out one!
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Date: 10/29/2013 4:35:00 PM
Set this one to music. I can feel the air, smell the apples. LOve, daver
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:18:00 PM
Wow! Sweetie pie ...... This such a simple and sweet rhyme.Bring charm in reading.Loved it
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Date: 10/28/2013 8:35:00 PM
Seems you picked the right words for this whilst out in the orchard Petal, and I do believe the last line is the very core of this poem lol. Take care, Richard
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Date: 10/28/2013 5:38:00 PM
Apple pie and cute booty...gotta be a winner Andrea.
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Date: 10/28/2013 5:18:00 PM
A very cute and humorous poem, Andrea. This one made me smile! Terrific work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for the great comments. And, thanks for taking the time to read my poems! :)
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Date: 10/27/2013 5:44:00 PM
Well you have packed a bunch of well picked And sweet similies,with richly spiced content Andrea..' hope you and Joe are getting a few breaks re the work front..!
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:23:00 PM
lovely write - had a chuckle about your admiring the sweetie's booty : )
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Date: 10/26/2013 10:52:00 PM
This fine write reminded me of the orchards in Washington State. Also, the hit song of yesteryear by the late Andrews Sisters came to my mind.
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