Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Apple Pickin' Time

Me and Sweetie pickin’ apples -
Ones for making pies we find.
While my Sweetie climbs the ladder,
I stand watching from behind.

In his levis he’s a cutie,
plucking apples from the tree.
Meanwhile, I admire his booty
since he’s faced away from me!

Apple pickin’ time is nice,
but what we’ve gathered will suffice.
Me and Sweetie think alike -
We need to add a little spice!

Me and Sweetie pickin’ apples -
Ones for making pies we find.
While my Sweetie climbs the ladder,
I stand watching from behind.

Underneath this autumn sun
I’m so glad I have my guy.
Apple pickin’ time is done.
I’m ready for my sweetie pie!

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Line Gauthier November 18, 2017 at 4:43 PM Congrats to you and your cutie for your win, Andrea.

Gregory Richard Barden November 18, 2017 at 3:59 AM I used to love taking my kids apple picking ... wonderful memories this brings back! Congrats, my friend, this is charming! :-) <3

Robin Davis March 1, 2014 at 2:00 PM Andrea Such a cute and creative write. A sweet guy and sweet pie. Perfect combination. LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Taming A Heart poem.

Phyllis Babcock December 4, 2013 at 7:34 PM Nothing nicer than watching booty and eating apple pie. Cute one. love phyl

Sara Kendrick November 12, 2013 at 5:42 PM Congrats on your winning entry..Way to go..Sara

Kim Merryman November 11, 2013 at 10:03 PM Andrea this is so cute! I really like it! This is going in my favs. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Love, Kim

Richard Ferry November 11, 2013 at 7:19 PM # 1 Again Congrats!! Myself..I seem to be the king of HM ,,,,,,Rick

David Fisher November 10, 2013 at 7:52 AM Love the poem, especially how the ending wraps things up so natural and so perfect!

Richard D Seal November 9, 2013 at 8:37 PM Here's a Congratulatory apple for the teacher lol, knew this would be at the top Petal. Take care, Richard

Skat A November 9, 2013 at 5:22 PM Andrea, Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE

Karen Anglesey November 9, 2013 at 11:38 AM Very clever with adorable visuals. Watching your sweetie pie's booty while he climbs the ladder to pick apples. Love the sweetness of this one. Congrats on your win

Joyce Johnson November 9, 2013 at 11:03 AM Really cute! Some day you'll run across it and wonder why you kept changing the rhyme. I have been gone for a few days and am having to get back into it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Sandra Adams November 9, 2013 at 8:37 AM loved this one the first time I read it...congrats on your win :) hugs

Bukang Liwayway November 9, 2013 at 7:51 AM Very beautiful poem. Congratulations on your grand win friend Andrea ;) Cheers!!

Dr.Ram Mehta November 9, 2013 at 3:46 AM Congrats on the win , Andrea

Robert Johnson October 31, 2013 at 4:08 PM Heaven on an autumn day is what you've sweetly written. Bring along your lovely pet and she'd be a prrrfect kitten. Wow, did I just write that. :)

Connie Marcum Wong October 29, 2013 at 9:48 PM This is so cute Andrea....slips off the tongue like icecream, sweet and creamy! Loved it! How do you do it? Every one of your entries is so special, I am lucky to crack out one!

Daver Austin October 29, 2013 at 4:35 PM Set this one to music. I can feel the air, smell the apples. LOve, daver

Litan Dey October 28, 2013 at 9:18 PM Wow! Sweetie pie ...... This such a simple and sweet rhyme.Bring charm in reading.Loved it

Richard D Seal October 28, 2013 at 8:35 PM Seems you picked the right words for this whilst out in the orchard Petal, and I do believe the last line is the very core of this poem lol. Take care, Richard

Donna Jones October 28, 2013 at 5:38 PM Apple pie and cute booty...gotta be a winner Andrea.

Kelly Deschler October 28, 2013 at 5:18 PM A very cute and humorous poem, Andrea. This one made me smile! Terrific work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for the great comments. And, thanks for taking the time to read my poems! :)

Joe Maverick October 27, 2013 at 5:44 PM Well you have packed a bunch of well picked And sweet similies,with richly spiced content Andrea..' hope you and Joe are getting a few breaks re the work front..!

Jack Horne October 27, 2013 at 1:23 PM lovely write - had a chuckle about your admiring the sweetie's booty : )

Robert Pettit October 26, 2013 at 10:52 PM This fine write reminded me of the orchards in Washington State. Also, the hit song of yesteryear by the late Andrews Sisters came to my mind.

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