Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Iambic Pentameter

Apple of My Eye

Cozy night bubbles a crimson delight
    Moon and stars tango on angelic heights
       Beside, pillowed the apple of my eye
   His breathing languidly rhythmic with mine

      His thudding heartbeat a stellar of light
  Arch strong features - repleting me with might
     The silence - a roaring serenity
         Next to him my euphoric ecstasy

     I adoringly stare on his presence
  Memorizing fully his very essence
      Touch of cotton - soft, I run my fingers
         To each square inch, I caress to linger
       Wrapped tight in his musky heavenly  scent

              Praying forever not only for rent
        But soon... I must leave you not to sin more
     Saving you from patches of harlequin
         I thank heavens for this amazing date
              Hating me is better than sinful fate

(c) Olive Eloisa
6:31 pm
May, 25, 2014

Inspired by the poem Silent Nights of Arthur Vaso with a twist

CONTEST: IMAGINATION
SPONSOR: DAVE WOOD
first place... to GOd be the glory.. !

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Liam Mcdaid October 26, 2014 at 9:11 AM olive this poem danced beautifully penned each step excellent pen Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 26, 2014 at 7:55 PM thanks much Liam.:)

Poet Destroyer A June 10, 2014 at 4:07 PM LOL.... BOOOOO...It's me again...Linda

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2014 at 7:56 AM :) PD Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 3:29 PM hugs.. :)

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 2:12 PM thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 9, 2014 at 5:01 AM most welcome LInda.. :D

Kelly Deschler May 30, 2014 at 4:29 PM This poem is so romantic and I was not expecting that ending. Great twist! Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write, Olive! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 6, 2014 at 4:44 PM Thanks much Kelly.. :D really appreciate your lovely sweet comments.. :D yes i tried to make a twist.. :D

Poet Destroyer A May 29, 2014 at 6:27 PM Awesome win Olive... luv ~Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 1, 2014 at 4:25 PM Thank you Linda.. :) love and love. and hugs.. :)

Elaine George May 28, 2014 at 3:47 PM Wonderful poem, Olive. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 29, 2014 at 2:06 PM And to you as well Lainie..:) CONGRATULATIONS..:)!!! GBU and thank you for passing by

Joseph May May 28, 2014 at 10:59 AM Congrats on your win Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 11:57 AM Thank you Joseph..:) I'm happy for your drop.. Gbu

Nette Onclaud May 28, 2014 at 10:30 AM imaginative and charming well deserving of a top win, eloi... warm congrats and hugggs! mahuhay ang pinoy. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 11:56 AM Thanks much Nette..:) And you as well Congratulations..:) galing galing!!

Jan Allison May 28, 2014 at 2:33 AM Well done on your well deserved top spot a beautiful peom. Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 11:47 AM Thank you much Jan..:) really appreciate Kate your drop by.. Kudos too!!

Dr.Ram Mehta May 28, 2014 at 12:13 AM A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 11:44 AM Thanks you so much Sir..:) Congratulations a swell..:)

Tim Smith May 27, 2014 at 11:40 PM Glad I got to see this beauty and congratulations on the win Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 10:57 AM Thank you Tim..:) I appreciate every drop by.. GBU

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 27, 2014 at 10:38 PM Wow a lovely creative write Olive ! congrats on first place win ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 10:52 AM Thanks you dr. Puma..:) GBU always..:)

Seren Roberts May 27, 2014 at 9:35 PM Well done Olive ......Seren Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 10:49 AM Thanks much Seren..:)

Paul Callus May 22, 2014 at 3:29 PM Olive_eloi...glad to see that you followed your better judgment and called an end to this relationship. Very expressive write with a great final line. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 3:26 PM Thanks very much Paul.. :) weee i din't intend to be.. :D Paul Callus May 28, 2014 at 9:32 AM Hi!!! Congratulations!!! Top podium, and well deserved!:) Good for you :)) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 3:42 PM weeeeee... this all fictional Paul.. :D? but of course if this happens i'll do the same..

Lucilla Carrillo May 20, 2014 at 12:12 PM Hi Olive; A very well written poem that I enjoyed reading today. One written with love. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 2:43 AM Thanks much Lucilla.. :)I hope you are getting better each day. :)