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Apple of My Eye

Cozy night bubbles a crimson delight Moon and stars tango on angelic heights Beside, pillowed the apple of my eye His breathing languidly rhythmic with mine His thudding heartbeat a stellar of light Arch strong features - repleting me with might The silence - a roaring serenity Next to him my euphoric ecstasy I adoringly stare on his presence Memorizing fully his very essence Touch of cotton - soft, I run my fingers To each square inch, I caress to linger Wrapped tight in his musky heavenly scent Praying forever not only for rent But soon... I must leave you not to sin more Saving you from patches of harlequin I thank heavens for this amazing date Hating me is better than sinful fate (c) Olive Eloisa 6:31 pm May, 25, 2014 Inspired by the poem Silent Nights of Arthur Vaso with a twist CONTEST: IMAGINATION SPONSOR: DAVE WOOD first place... to GOd be the glory.. !

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Date: 10/26/2014 9:11:00 AM
olive this poem danced beautifully penned each step excellent pen
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Date: 10/26/2014 7:55:00 PM
thanks much Liam.:)
Date: 6/10/2014 4:07:00 PM
LOL.... BOOOOO...It's me again...Linda
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:56:00 AM
:) PD
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Date: 6/10/2014 3:29:00 PM
hugs.. :)
Date: 6/8/2014 2:12:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 5:01:00 AM
most welcome LInda.. :D
Date: 5/30/2014 4:29:00 PM
This poem is so romantic and I was not expecting that ending. Great twist! Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write, Olive!
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Date: 6/6/2014 4:44:00 PM
Thanks much Kelly.. :D really appreciate your lovely sweet comments.. :D yes i tried to make a twist.. :D
Date: 5/29/2014 6:27:00 PM
Awesome win Olive... luv ~Linda
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Date: 6/1/2014 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Linda.. :) love and love. and hugs.. :)
Date: 5/28/2014 3:47:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Olive. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 2:06:00 PM
And to you as well Lainie..:) CONGRATULATIONS..:)!!! GBU and thank you for passing by
Date: 5/28/2014 10:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Joseph..:) I'm happy for your drop.. Gbu
Date: 5/28/2014 10:30:00 AM
imaginative and charming well deserving of a top win, eloi... warm congrats and hugggs! mahuhay ang pinoy.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 11:56:00 AM
Thanks much Nette..:) And you as well Congratulations..:) galing galing!!
Date: 5/28/2014 2:33:00 AM
Well done on your well deserved top spot a beautiful peom. Hugs Jan xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 11:47:00 AM
Thank you much Jan..:) really appreciate Kate your drop by.. Kudos too!!
Date: 5/28/2014 12:13:00 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 11:44:00 AM
Thanks you so much Sir..:) Congratulations a swell..:)
Date: 5/27/2014 11:40:00 PM
Glad I got to see this beauty and congratulations on the win
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 10:57:00 AM
Thank you Tim..:) I appreciate every drop by.. GBU
Date: 5/27/2014 10:38:00 PM
Wow a lovely creative write Olive ! congrats on first place win !
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 10:52:00 AM
Thanks you dr. Puma..:) GBU always..:)
Date: 5/27/2014 9:35:00 PM
Well done Olive ......Seren
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 10:49:00 AM
Thanks much Seren..:)
Date: 5/22/2014 3:29:00 PM
Olive_eloi...glad to see that you followed your better judgment and called an end to this relationship. Very expressive write with a great final line. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 3:26:00 PM
Thanks very much Paul.. :) weee i din't intend to be.. :D
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Date: 5/28/2014 9:32:00 AM
Hi!!! Congratulations!!! Top podium, and well deserved!:) Good for you :)) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 3:42:00 PM
weeeeee... this all fictional Paul.. :D? but of course if this happens i'll do the same..
Date: 5/20/2014 12:12:00 PM
Hi Olive; A very well written poem that I enjoyed reading today. One written with love. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 2:43:00 AM
Thanks much Lucilla.. :)I hope you are getting better each day. :)

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