Apple of My Eye

The smallest sin,
still lingers where,
within your heart,
it hides, a seed.
To grow with doubt,
and fear and hate.
It gradually becomes,
a gnarled tree.
Upon such limbs,
grow wicked fruits
containing sins
committed since.
And though they taste
of loving care
they burn the gut,
and sting the soul.
Encased in love,
and feather lore,
the pain subsides,
and you want more.
Addicted hence,
forevermore.
To live with sin,
and die within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 24, 2009 at 4:12 PM
Saing, I like the way you describe the impact of sin on the "tree" and the soul within. Very nice! Thanks for sharing, Carolyn
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