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shining scarlet tempts juicy pulps entice palate~ keeps doctor away

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/14/2025 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "apple" write. I love apples fresh or backed. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/15/2025 1:33:00 AM

Thank you.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/14/2025 11:15:00 AM

Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun haiku.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/15/2025 1:33:00 AM

Thank you, Tania for the placement.

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/14/2025 8:25:00 AM

I like the old saying included! Xo

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/15/2025 1:32:00 AM

Thank you for your reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2025 12:31:00 AM

Great job with apple. Congrats

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/15/2025 1:31:00 AM

Thank you.