Ap-Pall-Ing

Four pall bearers with a coffin were not,
in a cemetery able to find their spot.
They walked ‘round and around
all the cemetery ground,
so I’m certain they have lost the plot.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Callus Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 2:55 PM
Poor pall bearers, I bet they were dying to get the job over with and go home! Enjoyed your witty Limerick...that includes the title, too! ~ Regards // paul
Laurie Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 7:58 PM
Hello Paul … I guess it would be appalling to watch pall bearers trudging around a cemetery, followed by the mourners. Thanks again Paul - Lindsay
Faulkner Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 4:38 PM
I hope they didn't leave it to rot! (But I guess that's what a cemetery's for)
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Hello Michelle … you had me giggling with your comment. I certainly hope they ended up finding the plot before dark - thanks Michelle - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 10:47 AM
Hi Lindsay, a very humorous poem - maybe they dropped it and ran - no coffin for me - ashes in the sea! Well written Lindsay! Poetry hugs Jennifer
Laurie Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 10:31 PM
Hello Jennifer … I don't think I'll be worrying too much where I end up. Perhaps they put it in any plot - catch you soon Jennifer - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Obviously not found in the Writers Bloc! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 10:28 PM
G'day Rico … you're right Rico, or are you. I reckon I've lost the plot a few times - catch you Rico - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 11:05 PM
Haha, I can see their problem, cemetery's are getting bigger and bigger. Hope it wasn't too hot
Laurie Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 10:27 PM
G'day Tom … I can see the problem. Everyone is dying to get them - thank you Tom - Lindsay
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