Apon the Pillow

Apon the pillow he  rests his head.
I wonder would hatred consume.
His lover if only his thoughts were read.

For you can be  with one and yern for another. 
Kiss tainted lips.
Taste the salt of a minutes ago lover.

Strong was the oak to her weeping willow.
Regret  touches everyone .
As it stains memeories left apon the pillow.

No night has to empty no bed cold.
It doesnt have to be love.
we all need someone  to hold.

Stories I do not care to hear.
A moment shared is just that.
For tommorow another will be here.

The has fallen so does stand the willow.
To take a place is not to belong.
Leaving only a trace of love apon the pillow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 2/3/2010 12:36:00 PM
Beautifully sad, thanks for reading my poem.
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Date: 2/3/2010 9:45:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poem today Gypse. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2010 6:57:00 PM
Wonderful poem...yes if only pillows could talk...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:00:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Gypse! There is a lot of sadness in this heartfelt poem. I hope you are not writing from personal experience. Stay strong and continue to share with us! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/2/2010 1:26:00 PM
Interesting use of metaphoric language in this write presented here today. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/2/2010 1:18:00 PM
Another nice piece Gypse, a warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
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