Apollo 11

Armstrong, Collins and Aldrin
were the three that made up the crew
to be the first men to set foot on the moon
was what they were determined to do.

1969 was the year that it happened
16 July was the day
early that morning the blast- off took place
Apollo 11 was sent on its way.

They went over their plans for 3 or 4 days
on their way as they traveled through space
then it was time to descend to the moon
and gently land on its face.

On 20 July they made their descent
in the lunar module they commanded
History was made when we heard these words
"Houston, the Eagle has landed."

Neil Armstrong stepped out of the Eagle
and uttered these words so defined
"One small step for man
one giant leap for mankind."

An American flag was left on the moon
as a reminder of what they had done
they returned to Earth on July 24
their success was second to none.

This event went down in History
its success helped us to learn
that though other planets are quite far away
we can go there and safely return.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/22/2014 4:43:00 AM
Hello Ralph, I would like to insert your poem in my music composition. It's an homage for Apollo XI. I need lyrics for the choir. I think your poem is the best for that. Thanks, Loïc Frécaut PS.: Sorry for my bad english ! I'm french !
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Loic Frecaut
Date: 7/23/2014 4:19:00 AM
Thank you very much ! When I finish my composition, I give you the sound (I use Finale. It's a software. But, it can't read the lyrics then the choir sing "Aaaaaaah"). But I need to send by e-mail. Would you like give your adress e-mail ? I thank you again ! Loïc Frécaut
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Date: 7/22/2014 8:15:00 AM
Hi Loic - Thanks. I would be honored to have you insert my words in your music. Your English is just fine, my friend. All the best to you and yours - Ralph
Date: 1/26/2011 12:01:00 PM
Excellent Ralph, your facts all appear in order and the flow is good. It brought back memories. I workd for Bell Telephone Labs in 1969 and saw it on TV as it happened. Now you have forced me to post a space poem I wrote called Eve of Purple Leaves.
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Date: 1/15/2011 9:00:00 AM
Very good. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. I enjoyed reading this step back in space exploration. Best wishes, Deb
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Date: 1/14/2011 12:39:00 PM
great write
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Ralph in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Dazzle Us With History". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:12:00 AM
Hi Congratulations on your achievement with this fine historical piece, Eamon
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Date: 1/13/2011 2:08:00 PM
Good choice of topic ..Great work..Congratulations...Sara
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:28:00 PM
Many congratulations Ralph on your win in the History contest. You took off and landed superbly with this account of Apollo 11. I can still recall viewing this quite amazing event in Primary School. Being so young we were in total awe. I sure hope your last lines will always remain true, again congrats....:)
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations Ralph on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:26:00 AM
Nicely done Ralph. I had coincidently choosen the same event as the walk took place on my 11th birthday and will always be a piece of history I personally feel connected to. You did a wonderful job in explaining the entire mission accurately and rythymically. Nice job, Joe
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:22:00 AM
This has to be one of the greatest triumphs of all time. Congratulations on your fine descriptive write. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:00:00 AM
Ralph, Congratulations on your win with this outstanding poem. James and I judged separately assigning points to all entries and the competition was incredible. Just tabulating the rankings took hours. Take pride in your accomplishment. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/10/2011 5:59:00 PM
wow! Ralph.. is this for the contest.. enjoyed your poem,,, and good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/10/2011 8:05:00 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Ralph. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/10/2011 7:56:00 AM
Ahhh, what wonderful memories this poem brings back for me! Like the assassination of JFK, and other historical events, I remember exactly where I was at the time. and how I felt as this event unfolded. You have taken me back to that time in your poem, thanks for the memories. I like the way it rhymes and flows. Well done my fellow poet.
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Date: 1/10/2011 5:25:00 AM
Nice write on the historical event Appollo 11, Ralph. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/10/2011 2:48:00 AM
a famous qoute now, " the eagle has landed..", ralph.. a beguiling piece that nrings back a glorious moment through your skilled pen... mush winning wishes for the contest! :) nette
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Date: 1/9/2011 8:38:00 PM
Ralph, it appears as if you have something that deserves extra consideration for the history contest. You have pervasive descriptiveness and ample rhyming in each verse.
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