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Apocalypse

It was then all things changed , life came to a end The ones left too suffer , the many taken left to wonder if I to should follow No something says stay you must try through all the pain you can survive to tell the stories what we are now , what we were we must try to live and forgive rebuild and learn all over but I am so Thirsty my hunger is begging for a bug please give me a drop of water I am full of fever and shock where is water how can I boil this mud It turns into night I am truly scarred one more day I try stay surrounded by Death's Gate .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/30/2013 3:37:00 AM
HUNGER IS BEGGING I WROTE ONE MYSELF ON THE SAME SUBJECT COMING SIGNS BEAUTIFUL I ENJOYED HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY
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Date: 8/30/2013 10:25:00 AM
Liam. If I am up against you , you will surely take the prize :) you are such a wonderful poet ~
Date: 8/25/2013 8:17:00 AM
Words vibrantly dark in this contest poem...hope you do well, this is a pretty solid poem Yvette. You'd get my vote for top rankings! Good Luck!, MC
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Shanity Rain
Date: 8/25/2013 12:52:00 PM
you are so sweet ! Where have you been my whole life , me meet by chance or by fate ? Fate , yvette

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