Aphrodite's Children

A tear drop of land in an eternal sea waits
for just the right footfalls to hideaway, to rest.
Let the sky brown their skin, let the ocean narrate
in the thunderclap of storms, let their love coalesce.
Oh yes, they survived and marooned here they await
solitude was their wish and Poseidon's bequest.
Rolled in the sea's fecund foam, and tossed on the tide
the children of Aphrodite in moonlight abide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 1:10 PM
I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Glistening Thoughts" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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March 31, 2012 at 7:17 PM
Great winning work..Congrats ...Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 12:54 PM
congrats Debbie on a glorious win for this exceptional write .. lovely lines and thoughts that glisten so bright luv..
Onclaud Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 12:54 PM
breezy, breezy debbie with a mythical feel to it... congrats on your glowing win!..huggs!:)
Johnson Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Prettily done, Debbie. Congratulations on this and your many wins of late. Love, Joyce
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March 31, 2012 at 1:16 AM
Very beautiful entry Deb. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Burch Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 11:20 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie!!! So steamy...where's my towel!! ;) Well Done and well deserved! Big Huggsss my friend,love~deb
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March 16, 2012 at 7:09 PM
Okay, now that there, that up there, is gorgeous. I feel romanced to my toes. Sophisticated poem with language that skydives. Glad I went searching, hon. Cheers. Cyndi. PS- are there more procedures for you down the road? All okay? Cause I don't worry enough, you know. I always need something more to fret about ;-)
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