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Anything Left Pure

I try to avoid the pending pain It's impossible, like trying to stop rain Issues surround me everywhere Creating a harsh reality of fear It's not about not having faith inside It's just a trap with no-where to hide A place where answers can't be found A place with lack of nature around Some changes never experienced before At the same time standing on a falling floor Health falters, striking poorly any given day Plodding forward, multi-tasking is the only way My courage is in what I can try to cure My love will grow from anything left pure Heidi Sands 6/3/23 POTD: 6/5/23

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John Hamilton

Date: 7/31/2023 8:01:00 AM

Enjoyed this write Heidi, I feel the same sometimes it's good to let it out as you have done. Hope your day is a good one!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/31/2023 8:42:00 AM

Hi John. So nice to see you visit! Thank you for the kind , understanding comment . I hope your day is a good one too and that your inspiration will bring you back to us here. Take care :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/14/2023 3:21:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I've enjoyed reading this one It speaks a lot.'

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2023 3:24:00 PM

Thank you very much Joe. It is nice to see your comment today :)

Michael Tor

Date: 6/10/2023 11:07:00 PM

Hang in their Heidi. He is with you and you are not alone. God is with us he is in control. Congratulations on sharing these heartfelt thoughts of yours. Wishing you Happiness, sound mind, and good health. god bless you...

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2023 3:00:00 AM

Thank you very much Michael. I hope all is well. :)

Deb M

Date: 6/8/2023 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations Heidi on POTD. A very emotional and touching poem. I am sorry you are feeling overwhelmed thats not a nice place to be. I hope things improve and head in a positive direction. Reach out to someone if you need too. Take care…Debx

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2023 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Deb. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/7/2023 3:30:00 PM

Hello Heidi, Congratulations on your POTD. I also believe there is somehting pure in the world. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2023 4:40:00 AM

Me too! Thank you Darlene. I hope you have a nice day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/8/2023 2:41:00 PM

Hello Heidi, You are welcome. I hope nature gets back to normal soon. Hugs.\ Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2023 12:28:00 PM

Thank you very much Darlene :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/6/2023 4:39:00 AM

Heidi, congratulations on your POTD honors!! I still believe that there is still something eft pure in our world!! Don't give up!! Enjoy your day xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/6/2023 5:52:00 AM

Thank you very much. Happy Tuesday xxoo :)

Daisy Meadows

Date: 6/5/2023 11:05:00 PM

A good description of how difficult things can be. A good poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/6/2023 1:12:00 AM

Thank you very much Jeanette :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/5/2023 8:49:00 PM

Dear Heidi, your strength will get you through the trying times ahead. Each day is different, yet, with courage and faith- each step is a little easier. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/6/2023 1:12:00 AM

Thank you Brandy. Hugs :)

Arlo Parker

Date: 6/5/2023 7:07:00 PM

POTD 2 be sure. Pain relief prayers lifted asap! Rest well, Ms. Sands. =;o/

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/6/2023 1:11:00 AM

Thank you very much Arlo :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 6/5/2023 5:15:00 PM

Trying to make sense of all that we face in today's world. No where to turn, we falter. We try to have faith in tomorrow. Strong emotions! Well done. Congrats on POTD!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/6/2023 1:11:00 AM

Thank you Sandy. These are different times. Take care :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/5/2023 2:55:00 PM

A lot of things culminating into stormy emotions, Congrats on POTD Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 3:16:00 PM

Yes. Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your comment , :)

John Watt

Date: 6/5/2023 12:21:00 PM

Heidi, I think the strength of this poem is in your honesty and vulnerability as dreams and realities combine. Wonderfully stated; I love the line "standing on a falling floor". Anyone who has felt like they are in a free fall with no real assurance of the future can totally relate. The final line is a striking and beautiful synopsis of a life of overcoming adversity. I applaud your courage and your sharing the struggle in poetry. Congrats on POTD ~ John

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 1:29:00 PM

Thank you for such a nice comment John. It makes a positive difference reading it. I appreciate your input. :)

Jim Slaughter

Date: 6/5/2023 10:54:00 AM

I love the next-to-last line, Heidi. We can't "cure" everything that goes wrong in our lives, we can only do the best we can for as long as we can. I hope your "courage" will see you through your present trials and tribulations. Maybe getting POTD will help a little.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 11:01:00 AM

Thank you Jim. I appreciate your kind , understanding, comment :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2023 10:10:00 AM

Sounds like you're under siege, Heidi. Perhaps saying 'Help!' will help. Many others want to do good by helping, esp. when they have an address for their help, I think... Congrats on POTD

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 10:14:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Gershon. I appreciate it :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/5/2023 7:22:00 AM

Heidi, such an emotional and powerful poem ! Congratulation on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor !

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 7:27:00 AM

Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/5/2023 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations Heidi on POTD. Hang in there! If you are anything like me, I'm just trying to make it to the finish line standing up:) Not that much farther to go from here.

Arlo Parker
Date: 6/5/2023 7:08:00 PM

Thank God the finish line is a threshold and not a wall! :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 6:57:00 AM

Yes, same here DT. You and me both. Thank you. Take care :)

Trevor Dsouza

Date: 6/5/2023 6:15:00 AM

Lovely and appropriate choice of words. quite an inspiring read. you seem to have a positive approach even when times are hard. enjoyed reading your poem

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 6:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Trevor. I am happy to see your comment :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/5/2023 5:32:00 AM

We all experience pain and despair sometimes. Dear Heidi, I understand what and how you are going through, though everybody's situation may be different. I am sure you are moving on, with courage.Congratulations on your POTD honour - creativity helps us to survive. Love ~ Mala

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 6:56:00 AM

Thank you very much Mala ! You are right and creativity does help. I got blocked when I usually write about nature and then a tragic incident occurred , changing nature all around me, among other things. I appreciate your kindness and taking time to comment. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/5/2023 4:54:00 AM

Back with congrats on POTD, Heidi. Enjoy your special day today, my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 5:21:00 AM

Thank you so very much Vijay :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/5/2023 4:15:00 AM

Dear Heidi, we have to try not to dwell on pending pain although I’m going through much the same, let’s hope the future is brighter than the now. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 5:21:00 AM

We all have things to go through. Some, more stuck than others. All situations different in their own way. Thank you for your encouraging comment:)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/5/2023 3:58:00 AM

A great expression of the human condition Congratulations Heidi on POTD! Pangie

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 6:58:00 AM

Thank you very much Pangie. I appreciate your kind visit :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/5/2023 3:46:00 AM

Heidi, wonderfully expressed, hope things improve for you, congratulations on POTD!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 5:20:00 AM

Thank you Tania :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/5/2023 3:41:00 AM

Hii Heidi a soulful great poem that is superb so deserving of the POTD honour that you got, it is your day today, CONGRATZ!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 5:19:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind comment :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2023 2:44:00 AM

- Even if things seem hopeless and black...never lose hope, Heidi - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 5:19:00 AM

Thank you very much. Hugs :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/5/2023 2:09:00 AM

This too shall pass ~ let’s look to the future with optimism and hope. Warmest congratulations on POTD ,Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2023 5:16:00 AM

Thank you for your comment :)