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Anxiety Monster

Anxiety, Anxiety- you creep, you lurk, you worry me Mangy monster under my bed on all my fears you must be fed and when I try to starve you out you stab me with a blade of doubt You sneaky, scurrilous, savage beast I don't hate you, but I like you least! You are not cute or cuddly why do I let you cling to me? You're ugly and you're worrisome you drain my joy and leave me glum Anxiety, Anxiety- I hear you've achieved notoriety evidently I'm not the only one you'll hassle them all before you're done! 'Though, I don't see how you find the time to carry out your heinous crime... For all day long, and nighttime, too a hovering pest, too big to “shoo” you hang around and taunt me fierce by dangling daggers with which to pierce I tremble in my delicate skin but chin stuck out, I'm determined to win Anxiety, Anxiety- you will not get the best of me! You've wasted enough of my precious years you deserve no sympathy or tears like the monster you are, you'll be destroyed I've armed myself with the likes of Freud While you watch me, I'll study you more... know your every weakness- for this is war! I'll vanquish you for once and all I've armored up for the bloody brawl but hey- what's this, a hasty retreat? Don't tell me that you admit defeat! No Anxiety, Anxiety- you're devious, sly and slippery Before you let me kill you off you slink away to smirk and scoff knowing full well that you'll come back to get me with a sneak-attack!

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Date: 1/21/2019 5:17:00 PM
just read your reply to me a while back. Tried it. I've tried everything, so I will keep using temazapan though I hate being subject to a prescription pill!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/21/2019 5:29:00 PM
I'm so sorry, I hate it when nothing works like that!! Hope you get some relief soon. *hugs*
Date: 1/11/2019 10:24:00 PM
Oh I know that beast. Kick ass poem. Fave <3
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/12/2019 11:23:00 AM
Aw, thanks my friend!! ;))
Date: 1/8/2019 9:18:00 PM
Mine only attacks early morning. If it wakes me, I might as well forget getting back to sleep. Do you know of any super good sleeping pills? Even temazpan does not work all that well! GREAT poem on anxiety!!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/9/2019 3:11:00 AM
We've used a Hops-Valerian supplement... It helps you mellow out & get deeper sleep. That's about all I can think of, though. Thanks! ;)
Date: 1/7/2019 8:17:00 AM
"I've armed myself with the likes of Freud"; did he work? Anxiety can be a nightmare at times. "knowing full well that you'll come back to get me with a sneak-attack!" it always does.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/7/2019 3:50:00 PM
Not so much... It still sneaks up & gets me!! Thanks for the visit & comment! ;)
Date: 1/6/2019 6:14:00 PM
Anxiety does strike without warning sometimes, so impressed with all the different metaphors you employ here!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/7/2019 3:47:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! Sometimes writing it out is the best I can do... ;)
Date: 1/5/2019 9:23:00 AM
So many will be able to relate to this... You described it so graphically... Excellent poem..
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/5/2019 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much!! ;)
Date: 1/4/2019 11:21:00 AM
Dearest Rhona, as someone who can get drenched by this beast...I have finally learned how to smack it back...into it's place. I feel bad sometimes that the energy will only find itself landing on someone else. Love this poem! Happy New Year with peace, warmth and kindness in this New Year!Gab
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/4/2019 11:32:00 AM
Hey Gab, I know just what you mean! Glad you enjoyed it, my friend... and hope your New Year is filled with peace, warmth and kindness, too! ;)
Date: 1/4/2019 8:35:00 AM
This went to my FAV list; if we did not have anxiety, would we be compelled to write poetry? Would we be so smug that it might not have the vulnerability and truth it needs to be felt? Probably. Anxiety does sneak attacks, and I count on them. I love the way you stab at yours my friend. Love the poem!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/4/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thank you, my dear! Yes, anxiety has it's place... at least it started me writing again! ;P
Date: 1/4/2019 5:34:00 AM
Not easy when dealing with anxiety, we have all been there at some point and time, Have a wonderful day Breathe.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/4/2019 5:48:00 AM
Thank you! Yes, I'm breathing better now that he has slunk off in the shadows somewhere. For some reason, anxiety just strikes when I expect it the least...

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