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Anxiety Attack!

Lone walk. Fear the night. Soft footsteps.. black.. still, spooky. Fast flutter... Owl hoots. Neck hairs standing up! Headless horseman..giddyup! Eerie pumpkin grins... Noises behind me... Closer....hot breath on my neck!! Beat feet! Run like heck!!!

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Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/10/2010 11:45:00 AM

Spooky, scary, and amazing! Great job Rob. Lay

David Smalling

Date: 11/17/2010 5:40:00 PM

This is just why I do not go outside at nights ...

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 2:52:00 AM

this is superb, Robert, as good as i've ever read, Awesome! Harry

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 9/20/2010 9:26:00 AM

This is a wonderful write Robert and so spooky ...especially with Halloween right around the corner. Thanks so much for sharing! Have a blessed day~Mary~

Constance La France

Date: 9/19/2010 7:57:00 PM

thanks for your comment on my poetry~~ this was a scary ride in the night for sure~~ well done

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 12:21:00 PM

Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Linda Witt-King

Date: 9/18/2010 8:55:00 PM

Hey Robert...This is great fun, just in time for Halloween. I can see it now, black lights and witches brew to greet the Trick or Treaters, with a ghostly voice chanting as they approach the walk to your porch..."Lone walk, Fear the night....aahhh! Just saw your Soup Mail from earlier this month and there's a reply waiting.

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/14/2010 5:44:00 PM

wow and I thought mine was good but this was fantastic and could see this in a book too great imagery here my friend also thanks for your kind comments to my stuff I will be back to capture more of your great work I am so far behind in reviews it;s not funny keep up the great writing enjoyed this

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2010 11:27:00 PM

If this was in the contest and didn't win, I am flabbergasted. But perhaps you did it late? This is really really good, Robert. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2010 9:06:00 AM

Your poetry is a hit with me Bob! As is said,"Sleepy Hollow is Revived!" Thanks for you most gracious Comment today. AGape, Moses

Daver Austin

Date: 9/12/2010 8:23:00 AM

I can see old Ichabod (spelling?) clacking along at a disjointed pace. Super effort. Love, Dave

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2010 3:36:00 PM

Reads like a nightmare kind of dream..Good job on Halloween Scary write..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2010 3:16:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Robert. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day and keep your poetry coming. Love, Carol

Liz Walsh

Date: 9/9/2010 10:43:00 AM

Hate panic attacks - this poem lives one!