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a picnic lunch pepper moving on potato salad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/15/2012 6:48:00 PM
Love the imagery..."pepper moving."
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 3/16/2012 3:09:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Gail, I am glad you enjoyed the little haiku.. As Always, Shar
Date: 11/17/2011 11:54:00 PM
Yes they are prime movers those ants.. enjoyed this a lot Sharon..!
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Date: 4/18/2011 10:45:00 AM
This made me chuckle Sharon, that's just what happens once the little blighters get the scent of a salad....:) smiles
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Date: 4/9/2011 3:20:00 AM
Smile ~ Sounds like it was time to move with those little marching band ants, moving in on Your sweeet potato so that they could possibly take some Home to please their, happy made Queen ~ Smile ~ this is such a lovely little poe by "Your Beauty" my dear and truly enjoyable and quite nice to behold, the humorous side of "Your 'Precious Light!!!'" ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John!:) ~
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Date: 4/8/2011 6:57:00 PM
Excellent Haiku,Sharon---kashinath
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Date: 4/8/2011 6:10:00 PM
Creative and humorous, Sharon
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:53:00 PM
Smiles.... sweet write my dear Shar.. hope your well love Michael
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:51:00 PM
what would a picnic be without ants. a great creative Haiku, enjoyed reading it, brought a smile
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