Ants

a picnic lunch
pepper moving
on potato salad

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Gail Debole

March 15, 2012 at 6:48 PM

Love the imagery..."pepper moving."

Sharon Ruebel

March 16, 2012 at 3:09 PM

Thank you for stopping by Gail, I am glad you enjoyed the little haiku.. As Always, Shar

Joe Maverick

November 17, 2011 at 11:54 PM

Yes they are prime movers those ants.. enjoyed this a lot Sharon..!

James Fraser

April 18, 2011 at 10:45 AM

This made me chuckle Sharon, that's just what happens once the little blighters get the scent of a salad....:) smiles

John Rhinem

April 9, 2011 at 3:20 AM

Smile ~ Sounds like it was time to move with those little marching band ants, moving in on Your sweeet potato so that they could possibly take some Home to please their, happy made Queen ~ Smile ~ this is such a lovely little poe by "Your Beauty" my dear and truly enjoyable and quite nice to behold, the humorous side of "Your 'Precious Light!!!'" ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John!:) ~