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antonyms

I’m finally going to get on that platform
on the 18th of next month,
for a first-time, one-time performance.
The once, seemingly impossible will come fully true, 
which seems like a lot narratively.

It’ll be like leaving home—but we’re crashing out.
Moving on to other plot points, big topics and intense missions.
We’re all caustically optimistic.

Although there’s a cellular-level pull to move on
we can’t help but feel a hesitancy to jump into our multifarious futures.
We’ve never been improvident.

In my personal pool of experience, when I feel alone, 
friendless and unseen, this unintelligible fear noise arises,
and I'm tempted to tap out. But I never have.
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Songs for this:
walk but in a garden by LLusion
What Dreams Are Made Of by Evann McIntosh
I Like You (A Happier Song) [feat. Doja Cat] by Post Malone
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Bartley Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 5:25 PM
Thanks for sharing bubble gum girl. Think I'll go check out more, if you don't mind ...
Vionet Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 6:35 PM
I don't mind = ]
Fallica Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 4:30 PM
<3 . Does extruding senryu(s?) in HS seem like a lifetime ago? Any of your squad also going to Cambridge? Can't imagine you'd be friendless for longer than a couple of minutes. Bet your sister is happy. I’m happy for you too. :-) . (Bubble gum! Ha!)
Vionet Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 6:39 PM
No, I'm the only one. I tried to enlist Lisa *sigh* but she wants some time off. It DOES seem like a lifetime ago - I wrote simpler things, maybe even better things?
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