Antistrophe

Even then, as herds of winds pastured on boundless water; -

Even then, as mountains began to shake, the earth cracked, and by the rough, sharp as swords blades of grass
various monsters started crawling - 

- Clouds, carefree clouds played on the sun. Delicate  babish forms! - sophisticated 
outlines! - who needed them?

The savage, who ate up raw meat, watched them for a long time with incomprehensible eyes
and unknowingly sniffed a flower that was like a thistle.



by Pavlo Tychyna
in "Instead of sonnets and octavs"
http://www.yuryzavadsky.com/tychyna/zsio.html
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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September 29, 2026 at 7:35 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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January 30, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Great first post Anatoliy.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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