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Antiquing

Antiquing I note the sweet goodness in his tiny face, His little hand pushed in his pocket, I see his interested eyes stirring Toward a little car in a glass case with lock on it. Mom has his hand in her own While roaming in the antique shop, Wondering if she had the means To buy a pretty antique or not. Her little boy pulls away from her, He has those longing eyes glued, On the little steel antique Ford, he saw Causing his mouth to drool. Mom comes to find him, sees his yearning, She had found nothing for herself, She sees the little black car and those eyes, Guess what she bought from the case’s shelf.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/10/2019 1:41:00 PM
Adorable as a Mom always is..a beautiful story you wrote SW..I can picture the face of that little boy.
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Date: 1/10/2019 12:45:00 PM
Hi Sunlite, such a beautiful little story that comes from your heart. Your words paint such a wonderful vision within the mind. What peace and joy it does bring to this reader's heart. A fave. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/10/2019 11:30:00 AM
such a sensitive poem that stirs my heart, sun... good one!...huggs
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Date: 1/9/2019 6:59:00 PM
Ah, I like the tone of care and love in this fine poem! Enjoyed it! :)
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Date: 1/7/2019 1:42:00 PM
Endearing poem that touches the tender hearts dear Sunlite !
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Date: 1/5/2019 11:48:00 AM
Oh so sweet Sunlite :) I enjoyed this. Happy New Year!
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