Antiquing

Antiquing

I note the sweet goodness in his tiny face,
His little hand pushed in his pocket,
I see his interested eyes stirring
Toward a little car in a glass case with lock on it.

Mom has his hand in her own
While roaming in the antique shop,
Wondering if she had the means
To buy a pretty antique or not.

Her little boy pulls away from her,
He has those longing eyes glued,
On the little steel antique Ford, he saw
Causing his mouth to drool.

Mom comes to find him, sees his yearning,
She had found nothing for herself,
She sees the little black car and those eyes,
Guess what she bought from the case’s shelf.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 1:41 PM
Adorable as a Mom always is..a beautiful story you wrote SW..I can picture the face of that little boy.
Raven Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Hi Sunlite, such a beautiful little story that comes from your heart. Your words paint such a wonderful vision within the mind. What peace and joy it does bring to this reader's heart. A fave. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Onclaud Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 11:30 AM
such a sensitive poem that stirs my heart, sun... good one!...huggs
Leiser Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Ah, I like the tone of care and love in this fine poem! Enjoyed it! :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 1:42 PM
Endearing poem that touches the tender hearts dear Sunlite !
Sands Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Oh so sweet Sunlite :) I enjoyed this. Happy New Year!
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