Antique Knights

A summer Saturday night brings them all out grates shining
spit polished chrome, driven by bald men with pates shining.

Candy apple red antique corvettes with white wall tires
soft topped convertibles from Isadora Duncan's estate shining.

Well preserved women with beehive hair in leather bucket seats
go out for a ride with their Romeo's down the interstate shining.

Elvis dreamed of bee bop queens escorted round the scene
down, down town in La La land on the silver screen shining.

So put on your pedal pushers, grab a bottled Coke Classic
tie a scarf in your ponytail and dress like jail bait shining.

Cause it Saturday night at the antique car show and "YO!
and I wanta conjugate on that bumper's silver plate shining.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/14/2014 3:30:00 PM
this is such a HIP and cool Ghazal, Debs. I barely remember the rules of this form. but I really LIKES this.
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Date: 5/12/2014 10:33:00 PM
My hometown of Iola, Wisconsin has a classic car show in the summer, and it is the largest in the Midwest. I go to the show almost every year. I just love the nostalgia of a time that I never got to experience. This is a terrific write, Debbie! I enjoyed it very much!.... You might like my latest poem, which features a convertible.... Thank you for the kind congrats!
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Date: 5/5/2014 7:16:00 AM
I've been having difficulties with my internet connections lately, and on coming back my first read is this. What a pleasure. You've put a smile on my face, and made me so happy to be back. Thanks.
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Date: 5/2/2014 10:32:00 PM
I've missed your wisdom and vision, I finally got my lab top fixed so i will be on more often now, by the way i love old cars and the 50's and 60's so this is a cool write thanks for your sharing this poem with me tonight it's great to be back on the soup full time again. cheri
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Date: 5/2/2014 7:10:00 AM
I am partial to cars from the fifties and sixties. The seventies had the ugliest cars in history. I guess all the creativity was sapped with all the free love that was going on. I enjoyed your poem Debbie.
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Date: 5/1/2014 11:29:00 PM
I am an admirer of antique automobiles, and you describe a show with great detail. This write is shining.
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Date: 5/1/2014 1:48:00 AM
Lovely picture of the old world of nights, I still have to write a perfect Gazal, Debbie
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/1/2014 9:31:00 AM
What I wrote is unmetered Ram a classical ghazal would be metered
Date: 4/30/2014 7:25:00 PM
made me think of the local main drag that all the guys and gals would go show off their cars and cruise through town every Friday night, some for the love of cars, some looking for love...nice ghazal Debbie! glad I stopped by to read this one :) hugs
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Date: 4/30/2014 5:12:00 PM
Beautiful Ghazal with a creative theme....best wishes
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