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Anticlockwise World

Hands On those digits Backwards steps in forward turns in the race of time Charma

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2016 6:33:00 PM

I just typed in your name and this is the first poem it took me too. An oldie!! where i can let you know that your letter came back to me, did I tell you? If you would still like to see it, could you please soupmail your address to me? Luv ya, Andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/16/2010 4:52:00 AM

This senryu races along, too. Charma...good movement in this poem. It fits perfectly. Lovingly, Dane Ann

James Fraser

Date: 3/14/2010 3:24:00 PM

Clever Senyru Charmaine >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2010 10:48:00 AM

Yes u are correct... an introspective Senryu.. very creative my dear friend Charma..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2010 5:56:00 PM

And quite a fitting one for today when our clocks spring forward and WE lose an hour of sleep. WAAAA. I hate that. Good one. LUv, andrea

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/13/2010 1:56:00 PM

Really tought provokin Senryu, Charma! "Backward steps in forward tunes...Excellent! Wishing you a nice Sunday....Gert

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/13/2010 12:18:00 PM

Clever piece of Senryu craftwork , Charma . My Dad's brother was a clever , mender of timepieces . Would this make him an " uncle-clock-wise ???? ....

James Peranteau

Date: 3/13/2010 11:45:00 AM

Awesome senryu Charmaine ! That creative mind of yours is just flying !!!!! james

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/13/2010 10:47:00 AM

Thought provoking, Senryu, Charma. -Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/13/2010 10:14:00 AM

Wonderful senryu, Charma! Kept thinking about the hands on the clock in "The Curious Case of Benjamin Button" going backwards. Should have won the Oscar for best picture last year. It's about a man who's born old and gets younger. The "race of time" takes a new twist here. Thanks for reminding me of this great movie, Charma. Love, Carolyn