Answer To Mr Cellophane In Chicago

My wife of seven years has not noticed I exist
I give her whatever I can but it is never enough
She is looking for something better
Someone else
Someone more

I am invisible 
Inconsequential
Unlovable, unappreciated
Replaceable, obliterated,
Interchangeable, not even derange-able

Mr. Cellophane should be my name
People do not see me
I am not felt 
or respected 
or acknowledged
I am not even an I am
or an I am
or even an I

Others get smiles, waves and hugs
Strangers exchange appreciative glances
I get nothing

No one meets my eye today
No one smiles
No one has seen me at all
I am Mr. Cellophane
Invisible and expendable
If I disappeared no one would
notice or care

Mr. Cellophane 
Mr. Cellophane
If I was good enough to have a name
This would be too good for me
So maybe I will just refer myself to
Mr. but the Mr.  is too pretentious
for a nothing like me.
I will call myself C

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Date: 8/19/2020 8:54:00 PM
C for Chicago, eh?! OH, you KNOW I had to try this one, and I was not disappointed... And I'm even intrepid -- did I use that word right? -- enough to think that it wasn't about me! ~ From Frank Sinatra's Kind of Town,... Chicago is ... his kind of town... :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/20/2020 3:14:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
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