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Answer Me This

My life surpassed, fades long, yet fast
(Below the dirt, my coffin's cast)
Despite how deep, however vast
I'll dwell inside that vacant mass
It's only He that understands,
The One that gave me Poet's hands
So tell me please, if you can-
How from dust arose a Man?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/28/2015 5:59:00 AM
What a sad write...and now to win when he is no longer here to celebrate! I'm touched by this piece.
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:28:00 PM
I'm happy to see your work getting the top recognition that you always wanted and deserved. Congratulations, Chan... We miss you!
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Date: 2/22/2015 7:57:00 PM
So sad he wrote this before his death - Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:48:00 PM
Chan, (RIP) Wonderful seeing this one on a winning list. SKAT
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Date: 2/22/2015 4:05:00 PM
Archaic Poet, Sorry, it took me this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE
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Date: 11/1/2013 1:08:00 PM
I like your words here, the ryhme and meter are pretty tight and I like the line "The One that gave me Poet's hands" -my favorite! Good job! MC
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Date: 11/1/2013 1:21:00 PM
Thanks for being the first to reply to this poem, MC; I appreciate the feedback :)