Another Poets Mind

A journey into my inner most mind Will take you to a place no others can find A place where words dance in delight Sparkling so brightly such a wondrous sight Letters zoom across the glowing sky Joining into words as I watch them fly Some rest on clouds with a shimmering twinkle Creating new words with an alphabet sprinkle Without a thought they are grabbed from where they can be found And formed into sentences as they bounce around on the ground With a thought they will start to flow from my pen Writing them all down until it begins once again
Dan Kearley:11-22-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 3:39 AM
Now this is some good poetry!!!I love the rhythm!!!
Pettit Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 7:29 PM
Dan, this is one of the better poems I have seen from you. Your work has great descriptiveness and rhyming. This is a good one.
Ekpemandu Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 1:46 PM
i enjoyed reading this...a very exciting piece....nice chose of words..you really did a fantastic job on this one...
Green Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 7:20 PM
i love poetry,,,and this is amazing work,,,creative with a touch of brilliance.....
Mcknight Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 11:29 AM
:) very nicely flowing poem Dan, and thanks for the com. typo, grabed, should be grabbed I think.... enjoyed it...Cindy, Journey on....)
Kearley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 1:40 PM
You are correct! Thank you for letting me know. :o) I do miss a few words now and then.
A   Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 7:13 PM
wow! Dan, can you imagine the journey into my mind... gees... not as balanced as yours... he he he! I love the world your mind goes,, to come back and share wonders with us.... enjoyed,..p.d.
Kearley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Thank you :o)
Treetop Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Only last night did I write a poem on the same theme. I love this one it dances and is filled with joy. Thank you Dan:) Lizzie On a 3rd read Oh yes this is such a happy lovely poem!
Kearley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Thanks :o) So is yours...
Wesley Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 7:57 PM
Soup mail Dan - I don't know why you'd want to collab when you write such outstanding verse as this! It's really great.
Kearley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 1:45 PM
It's only once and a while I think?
Rams Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 1:56 PM
this is what i'm talking about, when i tell others about poetry. you covered it beautifully. i have 2 poems that you may like. POET TO POET ROOFTOP POET
Kearley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 1:47 PM
They were very good...Thanks for stopping.
Wesley Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 8:45 AM
I could dance to this Dan, it is filled with the kind of music that keeps a poet on the move. Keep that pen moving, your creativity inspires me. Soup mail for you.
Cooper Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 9:50 PM
idk if it did.. great poem.
Kearley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Thanks :o)
Dover Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 5:05 PM
Great poem, I especially love the last line, "Then I write them down and wait for it all to begin once again" I write like this all the time! Great minds think alike :) Love, J.
Kearley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Awww...Thank you! :o)
Treetop Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 2:37 PM
Oh how true and how those words do dance with us all....delightful thoughts lovely poem. LT
Lane Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 2:34 PM
I know, I know. Tony
Kearley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Thanks, Tony!
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