Another Poets Mind

A journey into my inner most mind Will take you to a place no others can find A place where words dance in delight Sparkling so brightly such a wondrous sight Letters zoom across the glowing sky Joining into words as I watch them fly Some rest on clouds with a shimmering twinkle Creating new words with an alphabet sprinkle Without a thought they are grabbed from where they can be found And formed into sentences as they bounce around on the ground With a thought they will start to flow from my pen Writing them all down until it begins once again
Dan Kearley:11-22-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/17/2012 3:39:00 AM
Now this is some good poetry!!!I love the rhythm!!!
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Date: 2/9/2012 7:29:00 PM
Dan, this is one of the better poems I have seen from you. Your work has great descriptiveness and rhyming. This is a good one.
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Date: 11/30/2011 1:46:00 PM
i enjoyed reading this...a very exciting piece....nice chose of words..you really did a fantastic job on this one...
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Date: 11/29/2011 7:20:00 PM
i love poetry,,,and this is amazing work,,,creative with a touch of brilliance.....
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Date: 11/29/2011 11:29:00 AM
:) very nicely flowing poem Dan, and thanks for the com. typo, grabed, should be grabbed I think.... enjoyed it...Cindy, Journey on....)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 1:40:00 PM
You are correct! Thank you for letting me know. :o) I do miss a few words now and then.
Date: 11/28/2011 7:13:00 PM
wow! Dan, can you imagine the journey into my mind... gees... not as balanced as yours... he he he! I love the world your mind goes,, to come back and share wonders with us.... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 1:43:00 PM
Thank you :o)
Date: 11/28/2011 2:18:00 PM
Only last night did I write a poem on the same theme. I love this one it dances and is filled with joy. Thank you Dan:) Lizzie On a 3rd read Oh yes this is such a happy lovely poem!
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 1:44:00 PM
Thanks :o) So is yours...
Date: 11/27/2011 7:57:00 PM
Soup mail Dan - I don't know why you'd want to collab when you write such outstanding verse as this! It's really great.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 1:45:00 PM
It's only once and a while I think?
Date: 11/23/2011 1:56:00 PM
this is what i'm talking about, when i tell others about poetry. you covered it beautifully. i have 2 poems that you may like. POET TO POET ROOFTOP POET
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 1:47:00 PM
They were very good...Thanks for stopping.
Date: 11/23/2011 8:45:00 AM
I could dance to this Dan, it is filled with the kind of music that keeps a poet on the move. Keep that pen moving, your creativity inspires me. Soup mail for you.
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Date: 11/22/2011 9:50:00 PM
idk if it did.. great poem.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 1:48:00 PM
Thanks :o)
Date: 11/22/2011 5:05:00 PM
Great poem, I especially love the last line, "Then I write them down and wait for it all to begin once again" I write like this all the time! Great minds think alike :) Love, J.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 1:49:00 PM
Awww...Thank you! :o)
Date: 11/22/2011 2:37:00 PM
Oh how true and how those words do dance with us all....delightful thoughts lovely poem. LT
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Date: 11/22/2011 2:34:00 PM
I know, I know. Tony
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, Tony!
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