Another Place, Another Time

A small child sat and watched the rain
nose pressed hard 'gainst window pane
mind mulling, musing, pondering
wistful, wishing, wandering
filled with fantasies, far off places
cities, forests, wide-open spaces

Formative years yearning
reading, imagining, learning
prospective possibilities
alluring locations overseas-

But grown-up responsibilities
forced a shifting of priorities
and nose stayed pressed against the glass
settled and still, as life went past

An old man sat and watched the rain
nose pressed hard 'gainst window pane
dreaming about what 'might have been'
wishes blow by in Winter's wind
like scuttling leaves, used up and dry
silent sorrow in pensive sighs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/10/2018 1:52:00 PM
Rhona, to me, this tells the sorry tale of a person who did not take a risk or two, did not do what he had always wanted to do, who had lived vicariously through other people's lives. A favorite for me, as I have met people with many regrets who did not take a chance, choosing instead to watch others live.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/10/2018 2:42:00 PM
Yes, you got my meaning exactly! I may not have done everything I once set out to do, but I stuck my neck out, traveled a bit, and did SOME of it! I see so many people who live their whole life never doing ANY of the things they dream of, and that is terribly sad. This was meant as a reminder not to sit and watch as life passes us by!
Date: 10/9/2018 3:19:00 PM
So reflective of how people and their perceptions change with time, love the touch of wistfulness-
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/9/2018 6:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle! ;)
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