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Another Monster To Defeat

Dealers sell drugs not far from your door, patiently waiting there in the dark. And with cash in hand, you leave once more, to troll back alleys, daunting and stark. A storm-soaked sky spits pieces of gray, hammering the ground with hail and rain. And as you stumble along the way, fear triggers jolts of fragmented pain. Ghostly specters, like prophets of doom, pimp their products with swagger and style. And stake out recesses in the gloom, where lies get exchanged for denial. Ignoring past pledges to abstain, you renege on your vow to stay clean. And shoot heroin into your vein, slipping right back to where you've been. Just another monster to defeat, as death bides its time watching you crawl. And the consequences of deceit are; that no one will care; when you fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2018 1:51:00 PM
Awesome and poignant, Emile.
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Date: 3/16/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and encouragements are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/20/2015 2:00:00 PM
Very dark picture you paint here - very vivid ending! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Matthew, I appreciate your input. Emile.
Date: 11/20/2015 1:18:00 PM
Very nicely done, taking a distasteful situation, story, framing it in such away, that it is palatable, and acceptable to receive the message. Thanks Emile. JDH
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Date: 11/20/2015 1:34:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your input. Emile.
Date: 11/20/2015 9:34:00 AM
sometimes, we destroy the very life that gives us wonder by being taken by ill habits... this is a biting, powerful way to express such indiscretion, emile.. huggs
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Date: 11/20/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your input. Emile.

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