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Another Monster To Defeat

Drug dealers sell not far from your door, patiently waiting there in the dark. And with cash in hand, you look to score, trolling back alleys, daunting and stark. A storm-soaked sky spits pieces of grey, pummeling the ground with hail and rain. And as you're jonesing on the way, fear fuels jolts of shame mixed with pain. Ghostly specters, harbingers of doom, pimp narcotics with swagger and style. And stake out recesses in the gloom; where lies get exchanged for denial. Ignoring your promise to abstain, you renege on pledges to stay clean. And shoot heroin into your vein, that brings you right back to where you've been. Just another monster to defeat; Death bides its time while watching you crawl. And the consequences of deceit are no one will catch you when you fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2018 1:51:00 PM
Awesome and poignant, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and encouragements are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/20/2015 2:00:00 PM
Very dark picture you paint here - very vivid ending! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Matthew, I appreciate your input. Emile.
Date: 11/20/2015 1:18:00 PM
Very nicely done, taking a distasteful situation, story, framing it in such away, that it is palatable, and acceptable to receive the message. Thanks Emile. JDH
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Date: 11/20/2015 1:34:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your input. Emile.
Date: 11/20/2015 9:34:00 AM
sometimes, we destroy the very life that gives us wonder by being taken by ill habits... this is a biting, powerful way to express such indiscretion, emile.. huggs
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Date: 11/20/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your input. Emile.

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