Another Limerick

There was a young man from China
Who couldn't think of anything finer
Than to smoke cigarettes - play with his pets 
Eat out at an all night diner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 2/5/2016 2:54:00 AM
Hi Matt,, Congratulations on your wonderful limerick win. Love Linda
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Date: 1/31/2016 9:02:00 AM
Matt, Fantastic! Congratulations on your win in the Limerick Contest!
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Date: 1/30/2016 1:59:00 PM
this was really cool and it was great seeing you on a winner list, matt!! (I bet you would have scored a first place if you had divided line three into two separate lines and made them equal syllable count).
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Date: 1/30/2016 3:32:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning limerick Matthew..
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Date: 1/30/2016 2:36:00 AM
matthew, Congrats on your LIMERICK win. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/29/2016 6:40:00 PM
Loved the humour Matthew - your syllable count was slightly off . Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:15:00 AM
cute one, I saw the four lines and thought, what's up? but then saw you combined the two short lines!
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Date: 5/8/2014 2:21:00 AM
Very funny and full of humor, Matt
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Date: 5/7/2014 11:09:00 PM
Hello Matt, lol, this is a fine cute, limerick.... Linda
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:09:00 PM
I cant think of anything finer either...except the smoking...lol. good one!
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