Another Limerick

There was a young man from China
Who couldn't think of anything finer
Than to smoke cigarettes - play with his pets 
Eat out at an all night diner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 2:54 AM
Hi Matt,, Congratulations on your wonderful limerick win. Love Linda
Selfa Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Matt, Fantastic! Congratulations on your win in the Limerick Contest!
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 1:59 PM
this was really cool and it was great seeing you on a winner list, matt!! (I bet you would have scored a first place if you had divided line three into two separate lines and made them equal syllable count).
A. Sharma Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 3:32 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning limerick Matthew..
A  Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 2:36 AM
matthew, Congrats on your LIMERICK win. ** SKAT **
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 6:40 PM
Loved the humour Matthew - your syllable count was slightly off . Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 8:15 AM
cute one, I saw the four lines and thought, what's up? but then saw you combined the two short lines!
Mehta Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 2:21 AM
Very funny and full of humor, Matt
A   Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 11:09 PM
Hello Matt, lol, this is a fine cute, limerick.... Linda
Gorelick Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 9:09 PM
I cant think of anything finer either...except the smoking...lol. good one!
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