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Another June

Another June ... Underneath the same sun, Much like the last forty And now its forty-one Forty-one long years ... Below the same sky, The finches are still here And somehow, so am I To see the zinnia Come into full bloom, To see the sunset Longer does it loom To hang wet laundry Flapping in the breeze, Where goes a bumble bee Buzzing 'round my knees Another June ... Come and gone so slow, Still, I am not sad ... To see her finally go.

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Date: 7/25/2024 6:01:00 AM
Amazing:)
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Date: 7/15/2024 11:44:00 PM
I like the third verse beautiful write gives sense of time and space 41 is that your age you don't look it beautiful poem xx
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Date: 7/10/2024 3:31:00 AM
All that’s been said already: lovely work Kelly. I sense an air of sadness and longing in your words in the first two stanzas but then a more positive tone in the last two stanzas. June means different things to different people. I really like your rhyming. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 7/4/2024 4:01:00 AM
Very true how it seems that June took her time this year. Miss hanging wet laundry and being outside- I live in a Sub division now and you miss out on so much that you enjoyed before!
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Date: 6/30/2024 2:21:00 PM
Wear I live now we have two seasons; Hot and hotter. We are now in the hotter. I finally get it where Stevie Wonder named his album "Hotter than July". But the good thing is we have flowers Year around.
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Date: 6/29/2024 8:13:00 PM
I enjoy this pleasant poem of a sweet month, June.
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Date: 6/29/2024 5:43:00 PM
stunning portrayal of the value of june in your life...and yes, may you have the happiest of birthdays as june finds you well, Kelly...beautiful in it's brevity... Blessings
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Date: 6/29/2024 10:58:00 AM
Your rhyming is impeccable, Kelly. We can't hold back time, but we can enjoy each day as much as possible. Great imagery.
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Date: 6/29/2024 10:14:00 AM
oh how the years fy by Kelly, may you enjoy many more birthday's I especially love these 2 stanzas, "Forty-one long years ... Below the same sky, The finches are still here And somehow, so am I To see the zinnia Come into full bloom, To see the sunset Longer does it loom". hugs jan xx
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