Another Fall

Green departs to seek
a more fulfilling role, which
it found in your eyes - 

more glorious than trees that
fade (like me) to muted brown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Kurth Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Tracy, what a nice tribute to fall and the beauty of your friend's eyes. Congrats on your earlier win. Krista
Kendrick Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 4:14 PM
Alright. Sara
Yamin Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Hi Tracy! Congrats on your elegant poem winning the Competition. Wish you many successes.- Mohammad
Goff Avatar
June 11, 2009 at 8:51 PM
love the originality of this poem! congrats!Tracy Jim
Peranteau Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 9:40 AM
I like this poem very much,..congrats Tracey ! james
Christian Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 6:52 AM
wow, a great poem congrats on your win, God bless you from diane
Hensley Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 5:45 PM
Very beautiful poem you have painted for us to read, i enjoyed it every bit! Congratz on being featured also!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 3:58 PM
Congrats Tracy on your win in the contest
Sullivan Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 4:39 PM
Congratulations, Tracy, on your well deserved win. All Best, Orma
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on your win Tracy. Love,Carol
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June 1, 2009 at 5:46 AM
Simply. terrific! YES, I can see why this is a winner! EXCELLENT!
Winter Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 3:51 AM
Truly brilliant Tracy. Warmest congrats and so well deserved. Love, Shar
Mason Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 10:01 PM
Beautiful play on words, Tracy and congratulations on your win in the contest. Don't spend it all in one place ... smile ...
Tugaff Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week and on your 2nd place finish in the contest. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando
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May 31, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen
Coet Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 11:52 AM
Congratulatons on this significant win for your superior tanka. Very well deserved. -ED-
Spence Sr Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 11:49 AM
This is an excellent tanka! I like the flow of the words and the message. Congratulations and great job! ~Joseph
Gorelick Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Lovely write and congrats on your success in the contest. Well done. BG
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May 31, 2009 at 10:15 AM
Tracy, Congratulations on having your poem, "Another Fall" featured this week. Keep writing. Always, Dane"
Adeite Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 9:22 AM
My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke
Fraser Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 6:53 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place>James
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 6:34 AM
Hooray for you Tracey. Great Job 2nd place !!!!Congratulations !!
Scott Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 5:13 AM
Congratulations on winning Tracy! Well done!
Saha Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 3:28 AM
A lovely poem. Congrats for winning the second place.
Ahmad Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 2:33 AM
Congrats for the 2nd place!
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