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Another Fall

Green departs to seek a more fulfilling role, which it found in your eyes - more glorious than trees that fade (like me) to muted brown

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Date: 9/4/2009 12:09:00 PM
Tracy, what a nice tribute to fall and the beauty of your friend's eyes. Congrats on your earlier win. Krista
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Date: 7/5/2009 4:14:00 PM
Alright. Sara
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Date: 6/29/2009 3:07:00 PM
Hi Tracy! Congrats on your elegant poem winning the Competition. Wish you many successes.- Mohammad
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Date: 6/11/2009 8:51:00 PM
love the originality of this poem! congrats!Tracy Jim
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Date: 6/6/2009 9:40:00 AM
I like this poem very much,..congrats Tracey ! james
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Date: 6/5/2009 6:52:00 AM
wow, a great poem congrats on your win, God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/3/2009 5:45:00 PM
Very beautiful poem you have painted for us to read, i enjoyed it every bit! Congratz on being featured also!
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Date: 6/2/2009 3:58:00 PM
Congrats Tracy on your win in the contest
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Date: 6/1/2009 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Tracy, on your well deserved win. All Best, Orma
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Date: 6/1/2009 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tracy. Love,Carol
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Date: 6/1/2009 5:46:00 AM
Simply. terrific! YES, I can see why this is a winner! EXCELLENT!
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Date: 6/1/2009 3:51:00 AM
Truly brilliant Tracy. Warmest congrats and so well deserved. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/31/2009 10:01:00 PM
Beautiful play on words, Tracy and congratulations on your win in the contest. Don't spend it all in one place ... smile ...
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Date: 5/31/2009 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week and on your 2nd place finish in the contest. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando
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Date: 5/31/2009 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 5/31/2009 11:52:00 AM
Congratulatons on this significant win for your superior tanka. Very well deserved. -ED-
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Date: 5/31/2009 11:49:00 AM
This is an excellent tanka! I like the flow of the words and the message. Congratulations and great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/31/2009 11:13:00 AM
Lovely write and congrats on your success in the contest. Well done. BG
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Date: 5/31/2009 10:15:00 AM
Tracy, Congratulations on having your poem, "Another Fall" featured this week. Keep writing. Always, Dane"
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Date: 5/31/2009 9:22:00 AM
My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke
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Date: 5/31/2009 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place>James
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Date: 5/31/2009 6:34:00 AM
Hooray for you Tracey. Great Job 2nd place !!!!Congratulations !!
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Date: 5/31/2009 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on winning Tracy! Well done!
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Date: 5/31/2009 3:28:00 AM
A lovely poem. Congrats for winning the second place.
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Date: 5/31/2009 2:33:00 AM
Congrats for the 2nd place!
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