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Another Fall

Green departs to seek
a more fulfilling role, which
it found in your eyes - 

more glorious than trees that
fade (like me) to muted brown

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Krista Kurth

Date: 9/4/2009 12:09:00 PM

Tracy, what a nice tribute to fall and the beauty of your friend's eyes. Congrats on your earlier win. Krista

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2009 4:14:00 PM

Alright. Sara

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 6/29/2009 3:07:00 PM

Hi Tracy! Congrats on your elegant poem winning the Competition. Wish you many successes.- Mohammad

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/11/2009 8:51:00 PM

love the originality of this poem! congrats!Tracy Jim

James Peranteau

Date: 6/6/2009 9:40:00 AM

I like this poem very much,..congrats Tracey ! james

Diane Christian

Date: 6/5/2009 6:52:00 AM

wow, a great poem congrats on your win, God bless you from diane

Justin Hensley

Date: 6/3/2009 5:45:00 PM

Very beautiful poem you have painted for us to read, i enjoyed it every bit! Congratz on being featured also!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/2/2009 3:58:00 PM

Congrats Tracy on your win in the contest

Orma Sullivan

Date: 6/1/2009 4:39:00 PM

Congratulations, Tracy, on your well deserved win. All Best, Orma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2009 7:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Tracy. Love,Carol

Celeste Butler-Mendez

Date: 6/1/2009 5:46:00 AM

Simply. terrific! YES, I can see why this is a winner! EXCELLENT!

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/1/2009 3:51:00 AM

Truly brilliant Tracy. Warmest congrats and so well deserved. Love, Shar

Sue Mason

Date: 5/31/2009 10:01:00 PM

Beautiful play on words, Tracy and congratulations on your win in the contest. Don't spend it all in one place ... smile ...

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/31/2009 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week and on your 2nd place finish in the contest. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando

Date: 5/31/2009 12:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen

Ed Coet

Date: 5/31/2009 11:52:00 AM

Congratulatons on this significant win for your superior tanka. Very well deserved. -ED-

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/31/2009 11:49:00 AM

This is an excellent tanka! I like the flow of the words and the message. Congratulations and great job! ~Joseph

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/31/2009 11:13:00 AM

Lovely write and congrats on your success in the contest. Well done. BG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/31/2009 10:15:00 AM

Tracy, Congratulations on having your poem, "Another Fall" featured this week. Keep writing. Always, Dane"

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/31/2009 9:22:00 AM

My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke