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Rob's <7 Contest   ~   July 29, 2025

Softly, the sun shimmers with golden glimmers as a sanguine sunset dances a marvelous minuet. Past the time of twilight skies, another day slowly dies, only to be reborn again on tomorrow's misty morn. With the warmth of radiant rays, Sol deftly displays Dawn's luminous light in place of celestial starlight.

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Date: 8/1/2025 1:47:00 PM
Dear Lin, your poetic pen shines in this exceptional poem. Beautiful imagery floats dreamily upon the page and into my imagination like the "golden glimmers" of sunset upon the tide. Congratulations for your success in Rob's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/2/2025 8:41:00 AM
Many thanks for your gracious comments and review of this verse, Susan. Not often, do I accomplish inner and end rhyming in each line, but with this one it just seemed to flow.
Date: 8/1/2025 11:10:00 AM
Sublime ~
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Date: 8/2/2025 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, P.M.
Date: 7/31/2025 7:04:00 AM
A very smooth and captivating poem. Congrats and thank you entering.
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Date: 7/31/2025 6:59:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for the placement, Rob. I truly appreciate it.
Date: 7/30/2025 3:20:00 AM
Your poem is beautifully written, we are all suns that fade day by day night by night, but like both we carry on.
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Date: 7/30/2025 3:32:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for your kind thoughts, David.

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