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Another Day, Another Fight

Another day another night another day another fight. I've lost my way I've lost my sight I want to stay but I take flight when nerves are fray and sparks ignite. Another day another night another day another fight. So I pray with all my might to find a way to make things right try to convey all my insight what I can't say I try to write and keep at bay my endless plight. Another day another night another day another fight. It's not OK I'm not all right the price I pay is out of sight and what I say is never right there is no way to make this right don't want to stay don't want to fight another day another night.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/26/2009 5:28:00 PM

sigh, I love the way this pours down the page, out of your heart. I have learned (though I don't always remeber, it takes 2 to fight, no resistance, no fight) At some point it's a total waste of your preciuos energy to even reply. Luv Ya Debbie

Lisa Mook

Date: 1/22/2009 5:37:00 PM

This is so powerful. It can relate to many people...including me...well done....always Lisa

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/10/2009 7:52:00 PM

Great poem Robin and your title is so true...Raul

Date: 1/10/2009 2:53:00 PM

The emotion comes through your words. The rhyme and short lines are effective in conveying your thoughts. Blessings to you. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/10/2009 8:22:00 AM

Found this poem after reading your comment on Kristen's poem....just wanted to say, that I hope you are doing ok, in the company of your sister's home, taking a break, and restoring yourself. I do hope, Robin, that things work out for you soon, and that happiness comes when you least expect it. God Bless ~ Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/10/2009 3:33:00 AM

I agree, the repititaiona nd layout of the are most effrective, so sad, but thank goodness we can write it out! Ahhhh...deeep breaths, this too shall pass (not that it helps right now) chin up my friend, love, Kristin

Brian Strand

Date: 1/10/2009 12:49:00 AM

Beautiful kyrielle Robin with so many innner poems.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/9/2009 5:41:00 PM

Very deep and profoundly written but sadly expressed, I like your style and composure..Nicely done!!*Tyesha

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/9/2009 4:12:00 PM

The repetition works well and reveals your frustration. Great write of a sad situation, but you are getting better every day. Hang in and stay tough. Love, Shar

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/9/2009 1:14:00 PM

smooth rhythem. and one can't help but wonder; is it realy that way? but we all know it's true. the trick is to never leave. to leave is to lose trust forever, but staying builds security and strenght. i liked it. good work. john h loving iii

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/9/2009 11:35:00 AM

Very well composed and rendered! Sort, clipped phrases really get your point across. BRAVO Robin!! Love and hugs, Keith

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/9/2009 8:55:00 AM

Love the rhyming scheme in this Robin...the theme makes me think about my day and how its going....way too much..sometimes I just want to close my eyes and reincarnate into someone else..lol..thanks for sharing this piece.

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 1/9/2009 8:49:00 AM

wow nice rhyming loved it.......Maryam