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Another Dawn

Then whistling strands went silent 
And cries bled out the ground 
Hushed over earthen weeping 
And golden fields were drowned. 

In tears of quiet, silence
Sounds out the nothing drum
Beats thrums of peaceful sleepers
A voiceless, ashen hum. 

Tears of quiet dried to rust
Lit up by morning glow
Picked off, a surface crust
The under-flesh to show

Un-scabbed earth with silver vines
Unearthed new ground rubbed raw
To house embedded saplings 
And see another dawn. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/12/2025 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature, Alice!
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Date: 6/12/2025 7:44:00 PM
Beautiful! Keep writing and keep inspiring, God bless.
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