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Blind to things he could not see love became hard to accept. And he just ignored your plea something you didn't expect. Rejection leaves you upset stirring up feelings of shame. And your heart's filled with regret as your tears douse passion's flame. Unrequited love’s true toll is that desire seldom dies. And a lonely tortured soul learns love loathes to compromise. Sorrow suppresses a tear yet innocence still taunts fate. And accompanied by fear sifts through the ashes of hate. Lost dreams are slowly replaced evoking time’s magic trance. And yesterday’s are erased giving love another chance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2018 2:10:00 PM
Love these lines "learns love loathes to compromise" "yet innocence still taunts fate. And accompanied by fear sifts through the ashes of hate." Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2018 2:14:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and encouragements are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/28/2015 9:56:00 PM
Heartfelt write. SKAT
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Date: 11/29/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I welcome your support. Emile.