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January 24th another delicate yellow rose bush I plant next to 34 others, each a favor for Mom’s memory, golden blooms of consolation in the backyard garden, where her spirit dwells “Has it been thirty-five years, Mom?” decades of nonverbal communication leave an emptiness I bend to sniff the roses’ dulcet fragrance remembering the allure their scent had for her on sunny days when she tended her plants as I turn toward the back door of our old, family home her voice I hear so clearly “They’re beautiful, dear.” quickly, I pivot, expecting to see her but nothing, not even a mirage “How many more years, Mom, how many more roses till we reunite?” *Written January 29, 2019 For Michelle Faulkner’s “Eight-Word Anniversary Contest”

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Date: 2/26/2019 3:58:00 AM
The garden sounds beautiful, Carolyn, I love yellow roses. This poem is a real winner, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/25/2019 10:58:00 PM
How beautiful Carolyn - A FAVE for me - as I read it I picture myself with red geraniums, my mom's favorites. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Date: 2/24/2019 1:22:00 AM
I have always loved yellow roses, this is a beautiful tribute to your mother's memory, congratulations on placing in my contest!
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Date: 2/2/2019 5:37:00 AM
GREAT Carolyn. Poem has heavenly touch. I am moved with great admiration.
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Date: 1/30/2019 2:03:00 PM
My daughter remembers her mother by planting yellow roses. Her mother remembered her mother by planting red roses. The path to heaven is more likely to be rose petals than streets of gold! Spring is just around the corner! Aloha! Rico
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/30/2019 3:29:00 PM
White roses are thought to be gifts from the souls of loved ones. Indeed, my rose petals than gold may line the path to heaven! Thanks for reading, Rico.
Date: 1/30/2019 7:20:00 AM
That ending brings tears..a heartfelt write..well done, Carolyn.
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Date: 1/29/2019 7:06:00 PM
This brought a tear to my eye, so beautiful.
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Date: 1/29/2019 5:54:00 PM
Hello old friend. Enjoyed your poem, you still got it my dear. BG
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Date: 1/29/2019 5:44:00 PM
wow, what a touching way to remember your mom, carolyn! you've captured this very beautifully in this poem...
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/29/2019 6:19:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Ilene. I've been missing both Mom and Dad a lot this month because of these anniversaries. For Dad it was just 10 years on January 6.

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