Annabelle

He was on his knees praying.  
Where he had been before and where he was going next 
Was up to him. 
But he needed guidance. 
Which is why he was on his knees.

There is love in everything, 
He thought to himself.  
He let this notion quiet his body; 
Entomb him.  
Twigs pressed against his kneecaps.  
They were gifts as well, 
He told himself.  
He got up, then, 
After the heat began to bother him, 
And walked alongside the brook 
And back to the farm house.

He was suffering from amnesia.  
He had no memory of who he was, 
Of where he belonged.  
He knew only his very next footstep, 
And the smiling girl in the window.  
Annabelle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/3/2008 11:52:00 AM
This is beautiful and hopeful, Matt. The image is perfect, a great walk along the path to redemption. Love, daver
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Date: 8/3/2008 11:34:00 AM
Lovely poem.
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Date: 8/3/2008 5:30:00 AM
Absolutly awesome story here - it really left me wanting more. This would make a great beginning to a novel - write it! Really really good! Loved it - Kristin
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Date: 8/3/2008 5:08:00 AM
Matt - I really enjoyed this poem - I can picture Annabelle in the window - She sure has a beautiful smile - God Bless
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