Animus: the Guy In Me

The guy in me does fine just on my own.
Attention I do not need constantly.
Because I rather like to be alone,
it’s by myself I’d often rather be!

The guy in me is not so nurturing.
Since every babysitting job I had
was tedious and most uninspiring,
to be a soccer mom would drive me mad!

The guy in me just likes to lie around -
to eat and watch TV instead of clean.
At Bed, Bath, and Beyond I won’t be found,
and in a nail salon I’m never seen.

My spouse dislikes the guy in me; this is
so strange, for most of my “guy traits” are his!

For the Animus-Anima Part II--Animus Poetry Contest of Tom Quigley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/27/2016 7:27:00 PM
God you have a lovely smile!
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Date: 6/27/2016 7:23:00 PM
Oh ya you said a mouth full and I am a true be leaver in to thine own self be true or you won't be worth a damn to anyone.I like the salon my friend;and when I told the beautician my hormone count finally came in as female she learned down by ear and said" Welcome to the dark side Thalia!" Everything is in perception and what a wild ride it is.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2016 4:02:00 PM
Congratulations, and please be quick with your announcement, dearie!! what a fun thing your beautician said to you!! (so it's Thalia? Am waiting for everything you will be showing us!!)
Date: 6/26/2016 5:17:00 PM
I like how you addressed the theme, Andrea. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/26/2016 8:55:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea! A well-written sonnet with an insightful and humorous twist at the end.
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Date: 6/24/2016 3:34:00 PM
Your last two lines give me a real chuckle! Couples do adopt somewhat one another's traits! :-)
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Date: 6/23/2016 12:42:00 PM
Yes, I like to be alone too unless I'm with somebody. Is this really you, Andrea? Love, daver
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/26/2016 9:46:00 AM
Of course this is me!!
Date: 6/22/2016 11:54:00 PM
Haven't been on the Soup much lately ... recently got a fever, so that's never fun ... passed through the whole family. But I'm better now ... just wanted to stop by and say I LOVE your new current avatar pic! Great to see more recent photos :)
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Date: 6/20/2016 12:16:00 PM
Interesting! I believe that everyone has male and female traits. Good write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/20/2016 11:04:00 AM
Hahaha ... what can you say? Can't live with them, can't live without 'em. I guess it's why they say "opposites attract" ... Aside from the TV bit, I'm pretty much the lazy type who is very self-entertained, without the constant need to socialize ... funny stuff.
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Date: 6/19/2016 8:00:00 PM
Ok, I've stopped chuckling after that last line. You have gotten in touch with the man in the mirror. Now go take a wonderful luxurious bubble bath. :)
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Date: 6/19/2016 6:55:00 PM
Funny Andrea.
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:37:00 PM
I'm glad you said your guy traits are his, for a second I thought you were painting us guys with a broad brush...you have most likely already found out no two guys are alike...ahem...."eye wink"
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Date: 6/19/2016 3:08:00 PM
Love it!! Tomboy Chris here has the same problem with my spouse...too bad! I am what I am, love me or leave me!...great write!
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Date: 6/19/2016 9:54:00 AM
Ha ha! I like it!
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Date: 6/19/2016 8:57:00 AM
I loved the ending:)
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Date: 6/19/2016 8:16:00 AM
Andrea, this was a FUN sonnet and I enjoyed it " v e r y" much and I am LOVING it 7~
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Date: 6/19/2016 3:29:00 AM
I kind of feel the same way...though I used to be a work a holic neat nut when I was younger. Now I just play with my g.daughter, write poetry, and watch great classic movies, after a swim. ; ) you did a great job on this Andrea.
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