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9/21/2025 for Spirit Animal Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Animal Snail

Spirit guide from above,
reveal the ways of love.
Tell me, my guardian snail.  

Son, don't ever worry
or be in a hurry - 
know that true love will prevail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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October 2, 2025 at 5:00 AM
Ha so cute David….belated Congratulations on POTD! Debx
Harp Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 11:44 PM
I've never heard of a snail being a spiritual animal, either. But I am convinced now... and why not?! I love this poem. Congrats on POTD. Moon Harp
Crandall Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 6:33 PM
Thanks, Moon Harp! I like that name "Moon Harp".
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September 25, 2025 at 6:31 PM
Thanks, Moon Harp! I like that name "Moon Harp".
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 6:52 PM
Missed this one for Rosh Hashana. Can you imagine? lol. ~ Sandy Koufax -- Well, we're both lefties and both Jewish... He's still a better pitcher than I am. lol.
Crandall Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 6:32 PM
Haha, yep, Sandy was one of my idols as a kid. For about 5 years he was pretty much the best ever.
Fowler Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 2:16 PM
Hey Dave my friend. I never heard of a snail being a spirit animal - but why not? :)) Congratulations! :)
Crandall Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 3:33 PM
Hi elle - yep, I think the snail is qualified and up to it. I wish more of them would be spirit animals so that they would get out of my garden - lol!
Rodgers Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 1:10 PM
Hello David, Congrats on POTD! I've been thinking about a lot of things lately, and your words were a comfort. I needed to hear that. You have a true gift, and I'm so grateful. Blessings, David, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Hi Daniel, I'm glad to hear that. It seems like we can't always control the timing of things...at least maybe that's what I think the snail is telling me :-))
Winter Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 9:28 PM
Dear David, congratulations on POTD! Your poem is absolutely gorgeous and heartfelt :)
Crandall Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 3:29 PM
Hi Anne - thanks!
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 9:08 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day.
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 9:10 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Nicole Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 7:36 PM
Dear David, your thoughts hold truth. Love that is honest and pure, is definitely worth waiting for. I like the reference to the snail. Makes perfect sense. : ) Congratulations my dear sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:11 PM
Thanks so much Brandy! :-)
Godwin Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 2:17 PM
Congratulations!!
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Thanks, CayCay!
Greenhough Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on POTD. This is an enjoyable snail tale
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Thanks, Hilda!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your cute "Animal Snail" write. Have a fun day with your win as you go writing away..........
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Thanks, Paula, have a good week!
Baker Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 7:29 AM
I'm with you on this one, David. Congratulations on the POTD honor, my friend! Bill
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:09 PM
Thanks, Bill!
George Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honor. Have an enjoyable week.
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:09 PM
Thanks, Valsa - have a great week!
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September 23, 2025 at 4:19 AM
returning to congratulate you, David, on your POTD designation. A 'guardian snail' is brilliant. Next thing you know someone will use a snail as a 'support animal.' HA
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:08 PM
Haha, thanks Sara!
Kitchin Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 3:08 AM
David, congratulations on POTD.
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:07 PM
Thanks, Tania!
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 1:39 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., David ... enjoy :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:06 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! :-)
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 1:07 PM
- Never heard of a guardian snail... but it sure knows everything about love :))) - Best wishes in the contest, David :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, haha, yes, I guess he's pretty smart :-)
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 6:54 PM
'My guardian snail...' Let's see now... Didn't I once view an episode of the Three Stooges with that as the title? lol. ~ Shemp
Crandall Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:38 PM
I was gonna go with "garden snail" but it had the wrong number of syllables.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 5:25 PM
what a clever response to the contest parameters. Made me smile. enjoyed your wit...especially 'guardian' snail
Crandall Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 6:41 PM
haha, yeah, we'll see. I was thinking about a snail spirit animal as being kind of like the angel Clarence.
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