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22.09.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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SPIRIT ANIMAL Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

4th place in the contest

- Animal Hermine -

 
                                                                     Mustela Erminea
                                                                with a black tuft of tail
                                                               long and muscular body
                                                                  - easily made angry
                                                                    inquisitive but shy
                                                              a master of mouse hunting
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Gasun Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 7:32 PM
Oh, so lovely! Thanks for introducing this cute critter through your adorable verse my dearest friend Anne-Lise. I love it. Thanks a lot for sharing and warmest Congrats on your win, too! Cheers and hugs!
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Congratulations on your win dear lovely Anne-Lise :-) Have a nice day, hugs AA
Puddifoot Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 3:22 PM
back with congrats for your win in the contest :)
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 11:16 AM
Oh, is that also an animal? Thanks you made me know it. Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 10:44 AM
Back with congrats. It's one of the cutest of the animals chosen
Anaya Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 7:38 AM
Fury cute, it's quite amazing learning of animals never seen. Congratulations on your win! XHUGS
Roper Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 6:55 AM
Back with congratulations, my dear friend.
Kerr Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 5:55 AM
Well done, Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your win with this clever composition. You deserved it Howard
Puddifoot Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 8:43 AM
it's not that easy to write an animal poem in such a short syllabic form, but you did a good job with this..hope you have a nice weekend too :)
Kerr Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Anne-lise, Your descriptions are immaculate and they sustain the reader to the very last word. Intriguing imagery and credible word choice. I wish you the best with this. Thank you for your comment on my work Howard
Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 4:03 AM
Ahh!! I like that animal. I would guess that you better leave them alone in their habitat or get some really serious bites. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
DiMino Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:44 PM
Beautiful little critter...though mice probably think different. What the heck, who cares what mice think?! Great descriptive words. Good luck with contest.
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Cute little rodent. Well-crafted poem. good luck, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 11:39 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Eve :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 4:45 AM
I'm not familiar with these spies. Good to catch mice.
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 5:37 AM
- In winter they change their fur color... they turn white... but always the black tail tuft, Victor :) - hugs
Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 10:09 PM
That cute dude must be extremely fast, he looks so cute and, yes, hyper-fast. Your well written words taught and reminded me about a creature I have only a vague recollection about.
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 1:57 AM
- Moves like lightning, CayCay ... many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
George Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 9:32 PM
It looks beautiful, but haven't seen it even in a zoo. I wonder what it does when angry. A great entry for the contest. All the best dear Anne! Hugs...
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 1:52 AM
- When it's angry it sizzles ... I can see them close to where I live in nature, so fun to watch :) - They are shy but curious ... if I whistle they come forward :) - hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:17 PM
not familiar with the Hermine...looks kind of cute...best wishes with this contest entry. hugs, Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 1:54 AM
- They are very cute, Sara :) - Funny animals to watch :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 4:23 PM
It's such a cute animal.
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 2:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 1:22 PM
Stoat (Mustela erminea) or ermine! It loves cold places, rabbits and hares. Interesting :-) Hugs ~ AA
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 1:59 AM
- I've seen it catch mice... but it probably eats a lot of other things... thanks for your comment, A.A. :) - hugs
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