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Animal Antics

A tall giraffe at our local zoo Got neck ache, (as giraffes often do) With his neck being so long The pain was terribly strong That he couldn’t reach the leaves to chew The giraffe doctor was quickly called At the condition he was appalled He told the staff not to laugh - Just get giraffe in the bath So to the bath the giraffe was hauled Well you can just imagine the sight The poor staff the giraffe tried to bite! They got him in the tub Gave his neck a good rub Then they tucked him in bed for the night They were told they must keep his neck warm … To this order the staff must conform Staff decided to knit A long scarf that would fit It’s now part of giraffe’s uniform! Animal Antics Contest Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton 09~05~16 N B The title will be amended after the contest to - 'You're having a Giraffe' which in rhyming slang means you are having a laugh.
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Watt Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Jan, fun read and great rhymes. I especially enjoyed the last line. Love the pic, too... congrats on #2 placement! ~ John
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Thanks so much John:-) hugs Jan xx
Steele Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan. Great humor. Well deserved.
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 2:51 PM
Thanks Randy:-) hugs Jan xx
Kannan Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 3:12 AM
A big Congratulations on your well deserved win.... Loved the poem and the picture...
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Thanks so much Supraja:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Your Animal Antic Poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ..How about crocheting or knitting that scarf..LOL
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 5:29 PM
LOL Sara it would end up with a holey mess if I tried to make one:-) hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan! Janice
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Many thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Back to congratulate you on 2nd place win with this beauty Hugs
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Many thanks Eve I had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx
Eldridge Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Nice story! Thanks
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Many thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 4:12 PM
you're too good Jan. This is brilliant.
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 3:00 AM
aww many thanks Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
Stebbings Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Congratulations, Jan. I thought that was a winner when I first read it. Barry.
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Many thanks Barry I'm delighted to be on the list:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Cute giraffe Limerick, Jan! I enjoyed your poem and congratulations on your 2nd Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Many thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Jan, lol! back with my congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 2:59 AM
Many thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 3:54 PM
This is very cute Jan. Congratulations on your top placement.
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 2:59 AM
Many thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx
Russell Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 8:01 PM
Very humorous piece of poetry it would be awful to try to do so. Very delightful poem except for the zoo staff.
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 1:31 AM
Thanks Deborah - I agree not fun for the staff lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Wow, wow, wow...I bow to the queen of humour, just a brilliant piece sweetie. Another one for your book. A Fav!
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Thanks Armand:-) I need to get the early poems edited as I wasn't good at meter when i started - am a bit better now I hope:-) hugs Jan xx
Stebbings Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Wonderful Jan. I am sure you will do well in the contest with this one. Barry
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Thanks Barry:-) hugs Jan xx
Chansarkar Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 9:00 AM
haha,he looks handsome in that scarf:)
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Its unusual but I started the poem based on the picture - i usually write then find a suitable pic:-) hugs Jan xx
Daniel Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 4:23 AM
Poor giraffe:) Really funny, Jan:) Looks like a winner:) Way to go:)
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
Dalei Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 11:58 PM
Dear Jan, This is a nice poem, specially for children. Brilliant thought & wonderful lay out. Loved it.........//:) with love
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Thanks Manmath yes I think it could appeal to all ages:-) hugs Jan xx
Rigoler Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 6:35 PM
This was a tall order, I bet! Loved every stanza, Jan. You're amazing! Best to you. /M
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Aww thanks Maurice I had such fun writing this poem I do hope Shadow finds it funny enough:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 6:14 PM
A 7 for this entertaining piece, JAN! Janice
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Cute story Jan. It has always been one of my favorites to visit at the zoo.
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 5:26 PM
We have a wildlife park no zoo here - gee I can't remember the last zoo i visited - my son would have been about 5 or 6 lol:-) I love the giraffe's eyes and eyelashes - such a cute face:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 5:02 PM
They should have made him an ascot...he 'd make a fine fashion mascot... maybe something in green...coordination is keen... Smile, it's time for your snapshot Fun stuff as usual Jan. Thanks for the smile:)
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Thanks Daniel:-)It was actually quite challenge as I wasn't familiar with several of the words:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Tall necks to cure I rather have a neck rub hugs
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Me too Eve:-) hugs jan xx
May Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Now that's a tall tale Jan!...nicely done...best wishes
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 3:23 PM
ha ha ha love that comment Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
White Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Hah, you found the giraffe first? What funny web searches do you do :D Gotta love this one!
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 9:00 AM
LOL Darren When I saw the contest posted last night I began looking for funny animal pictures and found this one - started to write the poem and finished it this afternoon:-) hugs jan xx
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