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Anger

Words of venom spew as cruelty of rage flames… piercing hearts of innocence This devious sin releases the beast within … to heighten ire of demons Instead,choose kindness beware the razor-sharp tongue … for verbal bouts kill one’s peace. ......................................... 11/06/2018 Edward Ibeh's One Of the Deadly Sins

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Date: 11/19/2018 8:22:00 PM
"This devious sin".I like that line!
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Date: 11/11/2018 1:45:00 PM
Well penned, nette. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 11/7/2018 12:26:00 PM
Love the graphics! Well done, Nette!
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Date: 11/6/2018 9:24:00 PM
Such a well crafted poem, written with wonderful expression, Nette! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/6/2018 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette, on this wonderful poem. Your line 'piercing hearts of innocence' is devastating. Well done. My best. Deb
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Date: 11/6/2018 6:42:00 PM
Think, before you speak. So true!! Words can either hurt or heal. When saying something while angry, usually you regret what you have said. And- you can't take it back. Congratulations nette, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/6/2018 4:21:00 PM
Nine lines which speak volumes,Nette. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/6/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Nette!:-) This is just fantastic! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 11/6/2018 1:33:00 PM
- Truth in your great poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2018 7:52:00 AM
Powerful write, Nette.. life is to precious to fill it with anger. Anger hurts other but none so much as the one who possess it!
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Date: 11/6/2018 6:53:00 AM
Good advice and good portrait of anger..best for a win, nette.
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Date: 11/6/2018 4:35:00 AM
lovely poem
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Date: 11/5/2018 10:19:00 PM
Your present your vibrant verses on the deadly sin of anger with elegant and delicate strength.. beautifully done, Nette. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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