Probir Gupta Poet Quatrain

Angels In the Rain

Plenty of rain this green monsoon
Men and women sow rice sapling
The harp brings out  intense pink tone
With sun and rain, endless grappling


Rows of rice plant rows of humans
Hands blend with joy in the green earth
The harp plays out blue and pink sound
Look at the red blooming of mirth


17 June, 2018
For Angels In The Rain Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Vermillion Scythe

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Janice Canerdy June 22, 2018 at 7:17 AM Such beautiful imagery, Probir! I especially like "red blooming mirth." Janice Probir Gupta June 22, 2018 at 12:50 PM Thank you so much, Janice ...

Anil Deo June 21, 2018 at 8:49 PM Best wishes in the CONTEST Guptaji. I never lived in India, but I know enough about the rice paddy ... your picture is great: bent bodies, bending saplings ... with goodness of the Earth. Monsoon is Life---Bollywood sings it best. Aum Tat Sat Probir Gupta June 21, 2018 at 11:32 PM Even if you never lived in India and still are an Indian in your blood, which the name indicates, the image i have lifted from the sowing humans and nature, will seem familiar to you ... Glad that you like it ... Thank you so much ...

Gershon Wolf June 18, 2018 at 10:11 PM Colorful, vivid imagery, Probir! Best of luck in the contest! ~ Gershon Probir Gupta June 21, 2018 at 11:33 PM Thank you so much, Gershon ...

Kim Rodrigues June 18, 2018 at 5:54 PM A pretty scene you have created! Probir Gupta June 21, 2018 at 11:36 PM Thank you so much, Kim ..

Demetrios Trifiatis June 18, 2018 at 10:57 AM Heavenly music, angels' joy, uplifting of men! Wondrous verses my friend, Probir! Good luck! Probir Gupta June 18, 2018 at 12:38 PM Wonderful comment ... Thank you ...

Winged Warrior June 18, 2018 at 9:55 AM Nicely penned Probir...should do well my friend...love & light...^WW^ Probir Gupta June 18, 2018 at 12:38 PM Thank you, W W ...

Faraz Ajmal June 18, 2018 at 8:05 AM It s a really lovely as well a beautiful poem, moonsoon sure brings many good tbigs with it but it s not always good to farmers as heavy rain isn t that affective, it even sometime destroys the crops but still even now I like to spend my time in rain without an umbrella, just let the rain fall on you and forget every other thing, Probir Gupta June 18, 2018 at 12:39 PM Thank you ...

Sunlite Wanter June 17, 2018 at 5:50 PM Lovely reading. Great juxtaposition of humanity and angels. Probir Gupta June 18, 2018 at 7:31 AM Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2018 at 3:06 PM - Lovely harp music, Probir - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta June 18, 2018 at 7:32 AM Thank you, Sunshine ...

Heidi Sands June 17, 2018 at 1:19 PM Very nice. I enjoyed this Probir :) Probir Gupta June 18, 2018 at 7:33 AM Thank you, Heidi ...