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Angels Danced the Day She Was Born Ii

Before I conceived I had been so forlorn, my dreams shattered, my poor heart torn- Then the ANGELS DANCED THE DAY SHE WAS BORN, the white doves sang in choir and I cried, and with her first whimper I was awakened, reborn. I was so full of joy, so completely satisfied. The toddler years came and I was a mess, many nights without sleep, days of stress- But even though I held frustration, I must confess, nothing compared to that smiles I saw, with those sassy words, I couldn’t love her less. Every night I watched her sleep in sincere awe. Young ladyhood arrived and her boldness intensified, seems I couldn’t control her no matter how I tried- But my little girl always did confide in my sacred words of wisdom with appreciation, I started to see a sweetheart growing inside. She became my sweet little God-given creation. The teenage years will soon come and I’m not sure how much trouble will come; what will she endure? Innocence may be gone, but my daughter is still pure, will she be a young woman of good decisions in life? I pray that in poor choices will find no allure, I can only hope she finds compassion, not strife. Parenthood is a blessing and struggle I’ll say, first you find peace, then heartache the next day- I can only pray she will find her safe way to live a life to the fullest with peace and joy. If she decides to grow up and move away, I will always hold onto hope she meets a nice boy. She shall grow up knowing mommy loves with her soul, may she see this messed up world as half full- And during those days when life has taken a toll, I hope she can move on with faith and trust, that her parents are here with arms to hold, and believing in herself is definitely a must. Parenthood Contest Silent One October 15, 2017

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Date: 10/25/2017 8:13:00 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, Laura - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/1/2018 1:46:00 PM
many thanks sweet Greg :)-luloo
Date: 10/21/2017 6:01:00 PM
Beautifully said, Laura. You've captured all the emotions and challenges so well. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/1/2018 1:46:00 PM
thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 10/20/2017 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with a touching poem, Laura.
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Date: 1/1/2018 1:45:00 PM
many thanks sweet Subimal :)-luloo
Date: 10/20/2017 6:11:00 PM
Hi Laura, What a heartfelt and moving write. The imagery is amazing. All we can do is pray that they make the right decisions when that have to fly away. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/1/2018 1:45:00 PM
thank you sweet Alexis : )-luloo
Date: 10/20/2017 4:30:00 PM
This is lovely, the birth of a child is a beautiful experience.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/1/2018 1:45:00 PM
thank you for my placement sweet man! :)-lullooo

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