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Angels Danced Wow

Celestial choir, angels dance to my hearts song
I longed for life’s kick inside
dreaming song cast to ether
petitioning heavens angels 
joyously they wept
then joined in creations dance

     Angels singing soars
     tears that bring the quickening
     blessed baby boy

Celestial choir, angels singing, you, me, belong
Bedazzled by your little smile
tiny fingers held my heart
magical incandescent moment 
love manifested, infinity
angels brought you here to me

     Sing Hallelujah!
     beautiful music of life
     hearts and souls create


WOW Poetry Contest - Nina Parmenter
Dated: 25/08/2019
Placed 3rd with thanks

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Frank Sheehan Date: 9/5/2019 6:09:00 PM Great piece. It really captures the essence. Enjoyed immensely. Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 9/5/2019 9:40:00 PM Thanks for your visit and comment Frank

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/26/2019 9:06:00 PM I enjoyed the wow! Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 8/31/2019 5:37:00 AM thanks for your WOW :) Richard

P.S. Awtry Date: 8/26/2019 4:01:00 PM What a glorious celebration! A Wow, certainly! Congratulations :) Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 8/26/2019 5:24:00 PM Thank you PS, yes a celebration, unforgettable.

Sandra Adams Date: 8/26/2019 1:59:00 PM back to say congrats on your win...you had the wow factor for sure.... hugs :) Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 8/25/2019 11:03:00 AM wow....absolutely beautiful write... nothing compares to the flutter of life inside of you, and the moment you first lay eyes upon your creation.... love it, wonderful poem, good luck in the contest(s) hugs :) Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 8/26/2019 7:19:00 AM Sandra, thank you for your visit. I remember it all vividly, truly a miracle. I marvelled at those tiny perfect fingers and smiled for days, still do.

Susan Ashley Date: 8/24/2019 9:29:00 PM Your beautiful poetry held my heart, Georgia. Tender emotional imagery and lovely haiku. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 8/26/2019 7:16:00 AM Susan, thank you for reading my most beautiful memory.